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Fulfilment
i want to spend each morn
Polishing your horn
And anytime of the day
i'll be your easy lay
And as the day goes by
With a hump and a sigh
i'll be yearning for more
Of your hardened core
Every evening i will
Give you such a thrill
Until lustful night falls
i'll be licking your balls
And as i drift to sleep
With you planted deep
i wish to again awaken
Being taken
By You
Polishing your horn
And anytime of the day
i'll be your easy lay
And as the day goes by
With a hump and a sigh
i'll be yearning for more
Of your hardened core
Every evening i will
Give you such a thrill
Until lustful night falls
i'll be licking your balls
And as i drift to sleep
With you planted deep
i wish to again awaken
Being taken
By You
Written by
Northern1
Published 9th Mar 2019
Author's Note
Me love you long time
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Re. Fulfilment
9th Mar 2019 1:46am
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9th Mar 2019 8:05am
Echo Billy Snagg. This is a heady read, telling of that 'I could make love with you all day' phase.
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9th Mar 2019 11:54am
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Aug 2019 11:45pm
12th Mar 2019 11:48am
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1st Apr 2019 9:52am
Very nice poem. I enjoyed the rhythm it was written in....
peace and love
1ManView
peace and love
1ManView
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1st Apr 2019 2:50pm
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6th Apr 2019 11:21pm
appears a very personal request
but let me say 6 inches of IVORY
can misery play
as you lay+
but let me say 6 inches of IVORY
can misery play
as you lay+
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Re: Re. Fulfilment
7th Apr 2019 2:48am
It's an early relationship vibe kind of thing
Could be anyone sexy
Glad you like it, thank you again
Could be anyone sexy
Glad you like it, thank you again
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7th Apr 2019 5:04am
all the same
guys have no control
they may hide it
may not show
but ensure indirectly
you know
it s UP inside
slightly wet also
to loo they must go
wash room has
private doors
guys are guys
I have been since
80's
guys have no control
they may hide it
may not show
but ensure indirectly
you know
it s UP inside
slightly wet also
to loo they must go
wash room has
private doors
guys are guys
I have been since
80's
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5th May 2019 7:23pm
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11th May 2019 6:12am
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16th May 2019 8:56am
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Aug 2019 11:45pm
17th Jul 2019 1:17pm
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18th Jul 2019 4:17pm
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Anonymous
21st Aug 2019 11:47am
"And as i drift to sleep
With you planted deep
i wish to again awaken
Being taken
By You"
Very romantic, especially the above, Northern.
Shouldn't the title have 3 L's ?
With you planted deep
i wish to again awaken
Being taken
By You"
Very romantic, especially the above, Northern.
Shouldn't the title have 3 L's ?
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Re: Re. Fulfilment
28th Aug 2019 3:34am
Very happy you like it MaryWalker
2 Līs or 3 are both correct, 3 being the more commonly used in USA
2 Līs or 3 are both correct, 3 being the more commonly used in USA
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Anonymous
31st Aug 2019 7:40pm
Oh, silly me! I keep forgetting us Americans have the most insane language on the planet.
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Re: Re. Fulfilment
1st Sep 2019 3:13am
Not at all, it's just a tad different is all. i get the English spelling and the American mixed up all the time.
i really like your Avatar Mary, you look pretty
i really like your Avatar Mary, you look pretty
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Anonymous
- Edited 1st Sep 2019 1:08pm
1st Sep 2019 1:07pm
Thank you, North. You're too kind. It's how I feel inside. Someday I'll get a real photo of myself up to compete with those sexy legs of yours.
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1st Sep 2019 3:38pm
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16th Oct 2019 8:51pm
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
23rd Nov 2019 5:29pm
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23rd Nov 2019 8:15pm
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Anonymous
3rd Jun 2024 9:50pm
Hey, nice rhyming and emotions penned so beautiful...🥵
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Anonymous
4th Jun 2024 8:05pm
But sadly you ain't here to help it.
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