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The Anatomy of Presence
becomes all the colors you want
encircling parts of you
never having been touched
by knowledge or love
This Sacred Connection
suspends the trap
of negative emotion:
anger, bitterness, spite
That’s when you know
you’ve made it;
despite what is faced
it is viewed as nothing more
than moving, living energy
through a filter of intent.
Presence, the very ownership
of having attracting it to you
enables you to transform
and release without blame
Then, in one breath
set it free, watch it dissolve—
having learned beyond fault
it was the evolution of Love.
~
encircling parts of you
never having been touched
by knowledge or love
This Sacred Connection
suspends the trap
of negative emotion:
anger, bitterness, spite
That’s when you know
you’ve made it;
despite what is faced
it is viewed as nothing more
than moving, living energy
through a filter of intent.
Presence, the very ownership
of having attracting it to you
enables you to transform
and release without blame
Then, in one breath
set it free, watch it dissolve—
having learned beyond fault
it was the evolution of Love.
~
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Re. The Anatomy of Presence
Anonymous
7th Mar 2019 12:41pm
You speak the Truth so eloquently.
"Presence, the very ownership
of having attracting it to you
enables you to transform
and release without blame"
Well done, Sweetie. 💜💏💋
"Presence, the very ownership
of having attracting it to you
enables you to transform
and release without blame"
Well done, Sweetie. 💜💏💋
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8th Mar 2019 1:57pm
Anonymous
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8th Mar 2019 1:58pm
Re. The Anatomy of Presence
7th Mar 2019 4:25pm
The presentation, of course, is well thought out and the message came at an opportune time, calming some thoughts I had.
Thank you.
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Re. The Anatomy of Presence
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7th Mar 2019 4:33pm
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8th Mar 2019 1:59pm
Re. The Anatomy of Presence
Anonymous
7th Mar 2019 4:38pm
Beautiful, Ahavati.
Matthew.
Matthew.
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8th Mar 2019 1:59pm
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Anonymous
8th Mar 2019 3:01pm
You're welcome. Sky directed me to it, and she was right, it's beautiful.
Matthew.
Matthew.
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8th Mar 2019 3:31pm
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8th Mar 2019 2:00pm
Anonymous
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8th Mar 2019 12:09pm
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Re. The Anatomy of Presence
Anonymous
8th Mar 2019 4:45pm
thank you for writing this, Vati...
... just thank you.
i can't tell you how much I've needed to read these words
xo
... just thank you.
i can't tell you how much I've needed to read these words
xo
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