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Who am I
Who am I.
Who are you?
What am I and what do I do?
Why are you here and why do you speak?
Why do you dare to sound so meak?
Human I am and human you be.
As we live for all eternity.
Why am I so few and far in between?
Who be the one that holds the key?
To all of these useless things.
Purpose I need.
Searching for it I be.
Who are you?
What am I and what do I do?
Why are you here and why do you speak?
Why do you dare to sound so meak?
Human I am and human you be.
As we live for all eternity.
Why am I so few and far in between?
Who be the one that holds the key?
To all of these useless things.
Purpose I need.
Searching for it I be.
Published 22nd Nov 2011
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22nd Nov 2011 9:30pm
"To all of these useless things"
Makes up who we are
Whether good or bad or "in between"
We can't get very far
To see and feel the world within
Lo and behold, we end where we begin
Makes up who we are
Whether good or bad or "in between"
We can't get very far
To see and feel the world within
Lo and behold, we end where we begin
25th Nov 2011 1:27am
10th Aug 2015 2:16am
That was great. the rhyme scheme was Very well organized, the meter worked well, i could feel your diction just from reading it and best of all i felt that lost confusion, that need for understanding... beautiful. just...beautiful. only problem i have: meek is spelled with two 'e's.
