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Sobriety Succubus
Slithering slut
sultry smiles
sucking the soberness
from my heart
leaving your demons
deep within my veins
you win this time
I cant fight you
the pain is too deep
my soul you have to keep...
sultry smiles
sucking the soberness
from my heart
leaving your demons
deep within my veins
you win this time
I cant fight you
the pain is too deep
my soul you have to keep...
Published 4th Mar 2019
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4th Mar 2019 2:58am
Anonymous
4th Mar 2019 2:59am
Heavy words. Sometimes we become what others make us. You keep rocking your notes. They are delicious. Love and hugs J
4th Mar 2019 4:02am
4th Mar 2019 10:33pm
6th Mar 2019 00:04am
I particularly love that last line, but the whole poem resonates. The alliteration of the first two stanzas is perfect. A wonderful and soulful write.
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
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