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Hurling me higher
Red and rampant rays..
Deep in a daze..
A trip void of time
so sacred and sublime.
Breaking through the blueish hue
you move into a world so new and misconstrued..
Wavy and so fanciful..
so stunning and wonderful,
alluring all spirits
no need to fear it..
Strange visions
hypnotize..
Swirling..
whirling..
hurling me higher
into astral fires..
It glares,
Sunray fun for one
I'll share..
Red..
Radiant rays.
Breaking through the blueish hue
you move into a world so new and misconstrued
Breaking through the blueish hue
you move into a world so new and misconstrued..
Deep in a daze..
A trip void of time
so sacred and sublime.
Breaking through the blueish hue
you move into a world so new and misconstrued..
Wavy and so fanciful..
so stunning and wonderful,
alluring all spirits
no need to fear it..
Strange visions
hypnotize..
Swirling..
whirling..
hurling me higher
into astral fires..
It glares,
Sunray fun for one
I'll share..
Red..
Radiant rays.
Breaking through the blueish hue
you move into a world so new and misconstrued
Breaking through the blueish hue
you move into a world so new and misconstrued..
Published 3rd Mar 2019
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3rd Mar 2019 9:37pm
4th Mar 2019 12:23pm
4th Mar 2019 00:37am
Is that acid, Hunter? I tried it once in my 20's; a friend talked me into splitting a blot once ( I mean seriously, what possible harm could 1/2 of a tiny dot do ). I'm telling you, for the next 6 hours or so I could've ruled the world and kicked anyone's ass who disputed that fact.
Anyway, this is a good poem, but I would suggest cleaning it up just a tab ( oops, tad ). Ask yourself if there are any words that are really not needed. Try reading some lines without them to be certain.
Anyway, this is a good poem, but I would suggest cleaning it up just a tab ( oops, tad ). Ask yourself if there are any words that are really not needed. Try reading some lines without them to be certain.
4th Mar 2019 12:34pm
It most certainly is👌haha yea i think its absolutely wonderful it's crazy how transformative and powerful it is yet it only takes micrograms to get the full effect I've tried it about 17 or 18 times by now. I took one friday for the first time in over a year and it was so magical those are the most memorable and mind blowing experiences of my life no doubt
Thanks for your suggestion I shall go back over it! Appreciate you reading and commenting Ahavati thanks!🙏
Thanks for your suggestion I shall go back over it! Appreciate you reading and commenting Ahavati thanks!🙏
4th Mar 2019 00:55am
4th Mar 2019 12:35pm
4th Mar 2019 9:11pm
