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Roles
She just can't seem to understand
The true nature of the game
I will not bow to some demand
Or make pretense of shame
I am inclined to dominate
Not grovel at her feet
I have appetites to sate
And will make my night complete
She acquiesces to my need
Slides me between her lips
Takes every drop of my hot seed
In both mouth and fingertips
Now she finally comprehends
The regulations of control
How to achieve my chosen ends
How to play her role.
The true nature of the game
I will not bow to some demand
Or make pretense of shame
I am inclined to dominate
Not grovel at her feet
I have appetites to sate
And will make my night complete
She acquiesces to my need
Slides me between her lips
Takes every drop of my hot seed
In both mouth and fingertips
Now she finally comprehends
The regulations of control
How to achieve my chosen ends
How to play her role.
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Re. Roles
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2019 9:35pm
Oh, this is just fantastic, Thomas. Loved it. Nothing better than a good girl!
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3rd Mar 2019 9:54pm
Thank you SoulzGirl for the kind words and RL entry. You're right. There's nothing like a good girl, and a possibly a very bad man.
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Anonymous
3rd Mar 2019 9:56pm
Every good girl deserves a very "bad man" ...😉
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3rd Mar 2019 10:29pm
Mmm..sweet debauchery. Such a yummy write with the strong convictions of need, you expressed with ease. You used one of my favorite words too..acquiesce.
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3rd Mar 2019 10:36pm
That's one of my favorite words too, and you used another, "debauchery." Thank you for the kindness and glimpse into what must be quite a vocabulary.
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3rd Mar 2019 10:38pm
Oh is that one of them too. I'm sure we share the same word lust & vocabulary.;)
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3rd Mar 2019 10:45pm
Dearest Crow! This just about had me on my knees waiting to be commanded, very delicious write.
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3rd Mar 2019 11:30pm
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Anonymous
3rd Mar 2019 11:23pm
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3rd Mar 2019 11:32pm
Maybe I'll write a sequel to this, sometime down the road. Happy to provide that glimpse. Sky-dancer. Thank you for the kindness!
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3rd Mar 2019 11:26pm
dearest Thomas so very sexy
I fear I've become quite Dominant
so I can understand your desire here...
love Brenda ❤
I fear I've become quite Dominant
so I can understand your desire here...
love Brenda ❤
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3rd Mar 2019 11:34pm
This is a desire of mine I have really yet to put into practice. Just need a willing slave. Thank you Brenda!
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3rd Mar 2019 11:39pm
Wow ... such a nice ... tight poem ... perfect flow ... perfect cadence ... leaving me ... dominated ... bravo crowfly ...
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3rd Mar 2019 11:46pm
So glad to assume the dominant role, LilDragonFly, whenever possible anyway. Thank you for the kind comment and RL entry!
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4th Mar 2019 2:09am
ohhhhhh
ahem
why am i reading this at 4am? ...
... really stunning erotica, mister crow
got me a bit hot & bothered
x
ahem
why am i reading this at 4am? ...
... really stunning erotica, mister crow
got me a bit hot & bothered
x
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Anonymous
4th Mar 2019 2:16am
When you spill my friend, you do it without flaw. You are raw and crude. I loved every word because they are clear for everyone to imagine. No middle terms and fussy researched words, that to many mean nothing. I loved every bit. You got my attention and lifted my senses to subliminal erotic heaven. Excellent as always my friend. J
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4th Mar 2019 9:50am
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
10th Mar 2019 2:10pm
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