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play misty for me
piano keys sing the blues
little sad notes tinkle in the background
music at a dinner party
putting me in the mood to cry
everyone in deep conversation
I'm alone in the dark
just bars and bridges to hang onto
ice clinks...whiskey on the rocks
empty feelings in my heart
the blues are playing just for me
low notes filled with despair
music over the damned
thoughts and feelings peak and plummet
keeping in tempo...with an operatic moaning
tears slip silently down my face
the hidden face I let no one see
on the outside, I'm cool composure
an ice sculpture with smile frozen in place
the blues are playing in my soul
I succumb to the feeling
knowing it will have its way with me
it starts and ends with you
play misty for me Clint
cos love is a cunt who won't let go
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Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 12:36pm
Beautiful write, dear Brenda! Its flow brought me to a slow sway, as if I was hearing the soul of the blues' song; as if I was following
your soul's slow sway...
your soul's slow sway...
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Re: Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 12:38pm
thank you dearest Takis for connecting with me where I'm at today I didn't think anyone would brave these waters you brought me smiles with your thoughts on this write...
love Brenda ๐
love Brenda ๐
Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 12:49pm
Boy did this write bring back memories. I remember that movie like it was yesterday.
Where did the years ago?
Where did the years ago?
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Re: Re. play misty for me
I don't know dearest Snuggle I used it as a metaphor how love just won't let go of you...
I'm happy it brought back memories...
love Brenda ๐
I'm happy it brought back memories...
love Brenda ๐
Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 1:03pm
Re: Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 1:09pm
thank you dearest Tender One for connecting with me here in the blues today...
love Brenda ๐
love Brenda ๐
Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 1:03pm
Re: Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 1:09pm
thank you graciously beautiful Dragonfly for feeling me in these words...
love Brenda โค
love Brenda โค
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Re: Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 2:03pm
thank you graciously dearest poet for such an uplifting and beautiful comment reaching me where I'm at...
love Brenda ๐
love Brenda ๐
Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 2:07pm
A beautiful ink that dripped from your soul Brenda. I sometimes feel that aloneness even in a crowd and the feeling of drowning evoke by some notes that makes your tears roll without meaning to cry. I can feel you.<3
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Re: Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 2:10pm
thank you beautiful poetess for reaching in and moving me today I can feel you too...
love Brenda ๐น
love Brenda ๐น
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3rd Mar 2019 2:12pm
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3rd Mar 2019 2:13pm
Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 3:04pm
A beautiful tapestry of melancholy dearest. I can feel each note as piano landscapes
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3rd Mar 2019 5:34pm
Re. play misty for me
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2019 3:07pm
Great movies...great pieces of music an outstanding written composition! 3 snaps!

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Re: Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 5:35pm
Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 3:37pm
Re: Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 5:36pm
Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 3:54pm
Well can relate of course ... Beautiful write ... but in the blues is also the kernel of all that is bright and beautiful for to have sadness means that love is never far behind ... Bless and love ...
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Re: Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 5:37pm
thank you graciously dearest FeNyX for the love and thoughtfulness here...
love Brenda โค
love Brenda โค
Re. play misty for me
3rd Mar 2019 8:03pm
I missed this one earlier. It resonates with me. For some reason, when I'm down, I play melancholy & nostalgic music. It soothes but it also gets the tears out. This poem soothed me like the music though, mama bear.
A hug from one blue soul to the other today..hopefully it passes soon, letting the sun shine on our melancholy . Your ending line was on point...
A hug from one blue soul to the other today..hopefully it passes soon, letting the sun shine on our melancholy . Your ending line was on point...
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Re: Re. play misty for me
4th Mar 2019 1:03pm
thank you beautiful Pandora for feeling the emotion of this write and for sending me love on it... I deeply appreciate you...
love & hugs...
Brenda ๐น
love & hugs...
Brenda ๐น
Re. play misty for me
4th Mar 2019 00:05am
A moody and wonderful write, Brenda. Brilliance here, and that last line floors me. Hard to imagine a more fitting definition of love, with that kind of grip.
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Re: Re. play misty for me
4th Mar 2019 1:05pm
thank you dearest Thomas I'm so happy the overall metaphor worked for you... I deeply appreciate the love...
love Brenda ๐
love Brenda ๐
Re. play misty for me
Anonymous
5th Mar 2019 7:02pm
It's almost terrifying how easily music can direct our moods and affect our souls. And how uncanny it is when the melody fits your agony. Beautiful poetry, my lovely Dark Angel. I love you...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow

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Re: Re. play misty for me
5th Mar 2019 7:04pm
thank you beautiful Willow yes it is I deeply appreciate your thoughts on this write...
I love you...
love Brenda ๐
I love you...
love Brenda ๐