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Do I Detect A Distraction?
I can't dismiss the hunger
Reading you from a distance
it appears you are waiting
for him to grow inside you
and tell you delirious things
but you seem uncertain
of the direction he will appear
- if he will bend you over,
or launch into you from the front
The excitement of that first penetration
causing you to obsess
requiring that quick rematch
to see if it really felt how you remembered
or if it can surpass the high of the last encounter
You feel slippery and would touch yourself
if you weren't dealing with customers and questions
just to get it out of the system
so you could concentrate on the last hour of your shift
But the long day requires his attention
to take you beyond such menial things
All you can really handle right now
is that gentle rhythm of him in you
breaking the respectable foundations
and granting your right to call, "more."
He has about five minutes,
or I'm stepping in.
Reading you from a distance
it appears you are waiting
for him to grow inside you
and tell you delirious things
but you seem uncertain
of the direction he will appear
- if he will bend you over,
or launch into you from the front
The excitement of that first penetration
causing you to obsess
requiring that quick rematch
to see if it really felt how you remembered
or if it can surpass the high of the last encounter
You feel slippery and would touch yourself
if you weren't dealing with customers and questions
just to get it out of the system
so you could concentrate on the last hour of your shift
But the long day requires his attention
to take you beyond such menial things
All you can really handle right now
is that gentle rhythm of him in you
breaking the respectable foundations
and granting your right to call, "more."
He has about five minutes,
or I'm stepping in.
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Re. Do I Detect A Distraction?
28th Feb 2019 00:23am
Sex is the best distraction. Nice imagination and great content. Also, funny at the end.
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Re: Re. Do I Detect A Distraction?
28th Feb 2019 1:08am
Isn't it? Appreciate your enjoyment of the content. I had to write my way out of the first line or it might not have made as much sense. Seemed an appropriate way to sum it all up. Glad you spotted the humour.
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28th Feb 2019 00:29am
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28th Feb 2019 1:10am
Re. Do I Detect A Distraction?
Anonymous
28th Feb 2019 00:51am
You are literally the only even vaguely erotic writer I read here. This is so incredible in its observational story telling as it is its frustration. That ending is just perfect.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
Thank you for sharing.
-M

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Re: Re. Do I Detect A Distraction?
28th Feb 2019 1:17am
That is a generous compliment! That ending was necessary to save the first line. I am truly moved by your comment. I never really intended to focus so much on the erotic, but I've fallen into that groove. You continue to blow my mind with much of your work. So this compliment has much weight from someone I consider the real deal.
Re. Do I Detect A Distraction?
1st Mar 2019 4:05am
Lost in distraction..isnt imagination the best. I've been this girl a time or two..in my head;) Love love love the ending!!
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Re: Re. Do I Detect A Distraction?
1st Mar 2019 4:26am
And I have often been the quiet observer of these imagined thoughts. I was very pleased with the ending. And it just magically happened. Much gratitude to the writing goddess.
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1st Mar 2019 4:44am
It really was a good one too. Did you read that comment above?^^ You're a writing god yourself & getting better. There is a huge thrill in being the quiet observer too &.nobody knows what's happening in your pants or your mind .;)
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1st Mar 2019 11:23am
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2nd Mar 2019 00:49am
You deserve some rosey cheeks, little boy.😜 Haha..do I know them. I miss them, it all seemed to die. Boooo!
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Re: Re. Do I Detect A Distraction?
2nd Mar 2019 1:21am
Little boy? OMG that splits me up. So hilarious. Booo is right. Tell me this torture will eventually lead us to a second coming. ;)
Re: Re. Do I Detect A Distraction?
3rd Mar 2019 11:23am
Haha..glad my tease had you laughing!! Did you say second cumming?! I hope so.☻
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3rd Mar 2019 4:17pm
Oh I got it! I was trying my own. Sometimes the "O" has it's own charm. I suspect it fell flat.
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4th Mar 2019 3:26am