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ROSES AT SUNSET
Divine
Red as blood
Perfumed youth
Hypnotizing....
A luring mistress
Does in the evening shadows of romantic flair
Speaks through the commune of bouquets
It's gardens
Dancing
Wailing through the winds
Adoration of silkened petals
The hands of enchantress touch
In every erotic nerve with veins raised up
Poisoned by the breath of sweet thickened nectar
Moon's glare gives them light
To be queens of the night
The army of thorns protect their fragility
Although their heart dauntless
Red as blood
Perfumed youth
Hypnotizing....
A luring mistress
Does in the evening shadows of romantic flair
Speaks through the commune of bouquets
It's gardens
Dancing
Wailing through the winds
Adoration of silkened petals
The hands of enchantress touch
In every erotic nerve with veins raised up
Poisoned by the breath of sweet thickened nectar
Moon's glare gives them light
To be queens of the night
The army of thorns protect their fragility
Although their heart dauntless
Author's Note
I love roses and think they are most beautiful of flowers and very symbolic.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. ROSES AT SUNSET
26th Feb 2019 6:25pm
Beautiful piece star1973! Love the lovely imagery and fabulous flow
bravo👏👏
bravo👏👏
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26th Feb 2019 8:29pm
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26th Feb 2019 9:02pm
Re. ROSES AT SUNSET
27th Feb 2019 3:41am
This poem sent chills up my spine. It's very well written and just Beautiful!! I can't wait to read more of your Poems!
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Re: Re. ROSES AT SUNSET
27th Feb 2019 3:46am
Really? Omg thank you I appreciate that. Yea I've got lots of material to post. But evidently you can only post 2 poems per 8 hrs...its like really?ugh....tomorrow is a day off I'll post more stuff.
Re. ROSES AT SUNSET
27th Feb 2019 5:10am
I love both of the poems you have up so far! I really enjoy writings like this, it has really beautiful imagery. Excited to see the new ones you have coming!
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Re: Re. ROSES AT SUNSET
27th Feb 2019 5:50am
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Re: Re. ROSES AT SUNSET
27th Feb 2019 1:13pm
Sweet! Thanks so much. Yea I really do like writing in that fashion and work hard at getting it that way....I love reading poetry that is the same
Re. ROSES AT SUNSET
27th Feb 2019 1:32pm
Oh this is just lovely ... echoes my love of roses ... your poem pulled me in ... carried me along till the end ... then made me linger ... welcome to DUP ...
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27th Feb 2019 1:48pm
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Re: Re. ROSES AT SUNSET
28th Feb 2019 10:24am
Omg, that is so cool about that you also love roses. Thanks for your feedback :)