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A White Petal
I have fallen in love with her,
and I cannot stop my feelings.
A rose blooms in our bed,
blooming from a rainy Summer.
A white petal had fallen onto the cover,
I picked it up, smelled it,
and rubbed it on her lips.
She still doesn’t awake.
and I cannot stop my feelings.
A rose blooms in our bed,
blooming from a rainy Summer.
A white petal had fallen onto the cover,
I picked it up, smelled it,
and rubbed it on her lips.
She still doesn’t awake.
Published 26th Feb 2019
Author's Note
Another poem I wrote after a break up.
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27th Feb 2019 1:58pm
27th Feb 2019 2:21pm
Thank you Dragon, this piece is interesting because I originally wrote it in German. In German it was intended to have a certain flow in sound and syllable.
-Daniel
-Daniel
18th Mar 2019 9:14pm
Touching...
Expressive, beautiful, and heartfelt writing, gothic - well done.
Expressive, beautiful, and heartfelt writing, gothic - well done.
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24th Jul 2019 6:55am
thankyou gothicsurrealism for an excellent entry ...the fallen petal n the lips..the non-awakening...fab. way to evoke the gloom..best for the comp.:)
