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Colour Me
Those crimson tones
- the slow crawl
of a private ritual
illuminate
lips that beckon
these dark persuasions;
though I could be simply
satisfied to press my own
to the vibrancy,
it would be dishonest
to infer that
I haven't taken them
a little further.
- the slow crawl
of a private ritual
illuminate
lips that beckon
these dark persuasions;
though I could be simply
satisfied to press my own
to the vibrancy,
it would be dishonest
to infer that
I haven't taken them
a little further.
Published 26th Feb 2019
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26th Feb 2019 12:46pm
gosh darn relatable... this is the writer's burden, to see & muse & muse & muse a little more... mayhap a little more musing {appropriate or otherwise}
clearly, i have a fondness for the ruby woo too... it's all very freudian {or so i'm told} apparently ~
much dig. so like
succinct & erotic
just enough suggestion to colour inside the lines
~ k
clearly, i have a fondness for the ruby woo too... it's all very freudian {or so i'm told} apparently ~
much dig. so like
succinct & erotic
just enough suggestion to colour inside the lines
~ k
26th Feb 2019 3:39pm
That ruby woo charms me every time. Even if only imagined, that can be a gift in itself. Honour we you felt this write pleasing.
27th Feb 2019 5:51am
It's refreshing to find one in acceptance much less admiration, T. Wow
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