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A Submission

Her aggressive kiss
Swallowed me whole
The coldness of her lust
Burned my flesh
She whispers to my soul

Holding me down
Her skin feels all around me
It’s like she’s everywhere
Her breath becomes my breath

I’m desperate to surrender
To know the desires within her
Bending me to her
The agony of lost control
Under her body of fire

The pressure of ecstasy
Is like an erupting volcano
Pushing the molten lava to the surface
My complete surrender imminent
As the explosion is released

Written by AspergerPoet56
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Author's Note
An attempt inspired by Sky_Dancers lastest poem The Strength Of Surrender
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