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Magic (Haiku)

I feel the magic
Of your presence pulling me
Like a gravity

Written by Summerrain75

Published 20th Feb 2019

#FallingInLove #love

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Re. Magic (Haiku)

20th Feb 2019 8:35pm

Wonderful haiku, summer :)

Love is truly a powerful force - I loved your simile, and thought it was a fitting comparison!

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21st Feb 2019 2:57am

Thank you NB for your wonderful comment. Much appreciated :-)

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21st Feb 2019 2:57am

Thank you NB for your wonderful comment. Much appreciated :-)

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Re. Magic (Haiku)

12th Mar 2019 7:51am

Oh I miss this feeling.... you have captured it wonderfully.

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