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The Beach At Night
The sand rolls ahead, a rippling carpet,
Smooth and pure under the glow of the moon.
The temperature drops, the breeze icy but refreshing,
Blending with the scent of the sand.
The moon reflects on the water, painting the horizon silver.
Mystery.
All around there is silence,
Deep and static, like the sea.
Smooth and pure under the glow of the moon.
The temperature drops, the breeze icy but refreshing,
Blending with the scent of the sand.
The moon reflects on the water, painting the horizon silver.
Mystery.
All around there is silence,
Deep and static, like the sea.
Author's Note
I enjoy trying to evoke all the senses through the use of words.
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19th Feb 2019 7:43pm
Thanks so much, MysticalRose. I'm glad you picked up the sense of serenity in the writing.
Good to meet you too!
Good to meet you too!
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
19th Feb 2019 7:42pm
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19th Feb 2019 7:49pm
Thanks so much. I'm pleased you can visualise these images. I live in one of the busiest cities in the world, so all those descriptions came straight from my imagination.
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Anonymous
20th Feb 2019 3:33am
Fantastic imagery!
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20th Feb 2019 8:32pm
Wow :)
Wonderful imagery, Lozzamus! You did a great job evoking the senses, so I think you succeeded in your goal!
Welcome to DU, by the way! I look forward to your future writings!
Wonderful imagery, Lozzamus! You did a great job evoking the senses, so I think you succeeded in your goal!
Welcome to DU, by the way! I look forward to your future writings!
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21st Feb 2019 8:55pm
Reading this you can feel the ripples of the sand under your feet. Well crafted.
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30th Oct 2023 11:49am
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30th Oct 2023 7:52pm
Thanks again, wolfatthedoor. It's good to get renewed feedback on poetry written a while ago.