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sweet girl
you call on me from the mists
you desire the innocent I conceal
she is for your eyes alone
the holy grail...
your eternal pool of desire
is hidden inside her
she is me...
before any man knew my flesh
with dewy eyes, she looked at you
her faith pure waters you drank from
a virgin soul reserved for your pleasure
enters me slowly...
a deep intake of breath
as you pop my cherry
every time is the first time
with my vulnerable girl
who quietly remains hidden
from the world...
you guard her jealously
she is for your eyes only
you will pull down kingdoms
destroy dominions to keep her safe
fresh pink inviting you take a taste
then dip in deep
tight little hole
pulsing with energy
your hardness responds
pushing in deeper...
connecting with the soul of me
you want every last drop I have to offer
sweet seduction
drank from you loving cup
I get drunk off your Omnipotence
my head begins to spin
you begin to fuck me now
your sweet little girl
now defiled...filled with your seed
to be made brand new tomorrow
sweet girl of faith
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Re. sweet girl
19th Feb 2019 2:42pm
Re: Re. sweet girl
19th Feb 2019 2:48pm
thank you dearest FeNyX for braving this one it's kind of taboo in that God has reserved this eternal virgin for himself...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. sweet girl
19th Feb 2019 2:50pm
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19th Feb 2019 2:53pm
Re: Re. sweet girl
19th Feb 2019 2:53pm
I was thinking.....this is what Rumi does.....the universal metaphor...
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Re: Re. sweet girl
19th Feb 2019 2:56pm
thank you dearest poet for your thoughts on this is greatly appreciated...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. sweet girl
19th Feb 2019 3:11pm
Has a very sexy innocents to this poem. I very much enjoyed. You are a pro, Crim.
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Re: Re. sweet girl
19th Feb 2019 3:14pm
thank you dearest DC I'm so happy you enjoyed a taste of my vulnerable side...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. sweet girl
19th Feb 2019 3:21pm
Re: Re. sweet girl
19th Feb 2019 3:24pm
thank you dearest poet this is the innocence still hidden in me... I'm happy you find her beautiful...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. sweet girl
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19th Feb 2019 3:35pm
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Re: Re. sweet girl
19th Feb 2019 3:37pm
no not at all beautiful Sky I'm so happy to know a Warrioress such as yourself is walking beside me...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
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19th Feb 2019 3:45pm
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19th Feb 2019 3:48pm
Re. sweet girl
19th Feb 2019 4:39pm
Lushes write on the love that was and is to this day
from a shy girl that gave her soul in total bliss
sweet work
from a shy girl that gave her soul in total bliss
sweet work
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Re: Re. sweet girl
19th Feb 2019 4:40pm
thank you graciously dearest Nutbuster for the love on this write...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. sweet girl
19th Feb 2019 9:56pm
Re: Re. sweet girl
20th Feb 2019 3:00pm
thank you graciously dearest poet so happy this stirred you deeply...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. sweet girl
19th Feb 2019 10:21pm
Such tenderness here, Brenda! I love your softer side as a contrast to your facets as a warrior and seductress. You have passion, and versatility, to spare. A sweet girl matured into a dynamic writer...
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Re: Re. sweet girl
20th Feb 2019 3:01pm
thank you dearest Thomas so happy you picked up on the vulnerability here as it's not really about the first time sexually more of a soul's first time...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re: Re. sweet girl
20th Feb 2019 3:02pm
Re. sweet girl
20th Feb 2019 1:39am
Oh my...not used to this type of write from u lol. It is equally as beautiful as the others. It’s not your typical piece at all. U never cease to amaze me 🙏🏽. Well done.
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Re: Re. sweet girl
20th Feb 2019 3:06pm
thank you graciously dearest Blunt One no this is a special one... I mean I do let my vulnerability shine but not often...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. sweet girl
I love it woman!! I think taboo writes are intriguing and I'm glad to see it welcomed here. I used to write it too..not about God;)...but I remember the arousal factor when I did so. I'm pretty open minded. Mine were story form & I couldn't do that now if I tried. It's nice to see it in poetry form too. I hope you enjoyed your tryst while writing!!;)
ETA..beautiful pic btw
ETA..beautiful pic btw
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Re: Re. sweet girl
20th Feb 2019 3:11pm
thank you graciously beautiful Pandora this write is extremely taboo because as you know this is about God's desires for my inner girl, my soul's cherry...I'm so happy you embraced this write...I did enjoy writing this I was feeling very soft at the time and open...
I deeply appreciate you beautiful...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate you beautiful...
love Brenda 🌹
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