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ashes to ashes
Life offers no sentiment for the weak minded.
Its those who adhere the laws of Moses that live.
Its kill or be killed.
Its eye for an eye.
Ashes to ashes is a law.
For life offers no sentiment for the weak minded.
Its those who adhere by the laws of the wild that survive.
It's a dog eat dog world.
The slowest zebra gets left behind.
The mightiest lion that eats the biggest potion that others hunt.
For this life its killed or be killed.
Its eye for an eye.
Ashes to ashes is a law.
Its those who adhere the laws of Moses that live.
Its kill or be killed.
Its eye for an eye.
Ashes to ashes is a law.
For life offers no sentiment for the weak minded.
Its those who adhere by the laws of the wild that survive.
It's a dog eat dog world.
The slowest zebra gets left behind.
The mightiest lion that eats the biggest potion that others hunt.
For this life its killed or be killed.
Its eye for an eye.
Ashes to ashes is a law.
Published 15th Feb 2019
Author's Note
It's not every time i do 14 lines,
I hope I did it good
I hope I did it good
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16th Feb 2019 1:20am
A wonderful fourteen lines. Such wisdom here! Life can be brutal for the weak minded. Yours seems strong and true.
18th Feb 2019 3:52pm
16th Feb 2019 2:48am
Hello, Poet...you did it just fine...but there's just a small error that changes the meaning... in line 10 you have used the word potion... which is a witches brew for making magic...in place of portion... which in this case is the Lion's share.
Just add the 'R' and the problem is gone... and then go write more like this...it's good... keep it up. hugs, Ely
Just add the 'R' and the problem is gone... and then go write more like this...it's good... keep it up. hugs, Ely
18th Feb 2019 3:54pm
18th Feb 2019 7:56pm
14th Mar 2019 1:41am
