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Anonymous
13th Feb 2019 7:34am
Hey El,
Is that Haiku?
It's great, so much content in so few words. You're complex.
Nice write.
Matthew.
Is that Haiku?
It's great, so much content in so few words. You're complex.
Nice write.
Matthew.
13th Feb 2019 7:44am
Hey El! lol I'm gonna call you that too if you don't mind? Well, I never have written a Haiku before so it is my first shot at one. Keep that in mind lol! Thanks for the comment🤓
Anonymous
13th Feb 2019 8:02am
Lol, I guess you could call me that, cool.
That's fantastic for your first one. I'm not a huge Haiku fan usually, but I am when they're that well written.
Great job El,
Matthew.
That's fantastic for your first one. I'm not a huge Haiku fan usually, but I am when they're that well written.
Great job El,
Matthew.
13th Feb 2019 7:39am
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14th Feb 2019 9:48pm
Really sweet little poem
Great line - maddening mixed with honey
Great description
Well done
Great line - maddening mixed with honey
Great description
Well done
