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Senryu
starry-eyed
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starry-eyed
kisses so tender
the entire earth falls away
leaving only stars
Written by
solanaceae
Published
11th Feb 2019
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#haiku
#lover
#relationships
#senryu
#stars
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Re. starry-eyed
Hunterapsych
(Shaman among machines)
12th Feb 2019 00:11am
Lovely lil spill! Beautifully written👏
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solanaceae
12th Feb 2019 3:22am
Thank you, Hunter. Delighted that you enjoyed it!☀️
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badmalthus
(Harry Rout)
13th Feb 2019 10:43pm
I can see Basho smiling at this wonderful haiku. Truly amazing ink.
Cheers...Harry
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solanaceae
14th Feb 2019 5:14pm
Thanks so much for your comment, it made me really happy. Glad you liked it! 😊
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NewBeginnings
15th Feb 2019 9:31am
Really beautiful, sol. I loved it :)
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mysteriouslady
15th Feb 2020 3:50pm
So simple, yet so deep. Love. <3
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Thetravelingfairy
5th May 2020 8:32pm
Ahhh this one! I gravitate towards nature based and universe inspired poetry (surprising I know), and this is such a heartwarming piece. Less is more sometimes
Fairy
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solanaceae
6th May 2020 00:31am
Thank you! I love nature based poetry too. I'm glad you liked it. <3
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InDreamz
31st Aug 2020 4:07pm
This is another wonderful senryu, dear poetess. Very Well done!
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solanaceae
31st Aug 2020 4:14pm
Thank you! <3
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