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pieces of life
sometimes I wonder
if I have the right
to hurt myself
with the other man's grief
but maybe
shapes love,
ungraspable affection,
a bridge -
a bridge
that gives me
a piece of the other man's life
and wouldn't I be
so alone in this world
in my world, in my head,
in my universe
if I wouldn't at least
receive a piece of life
once
and
give a piece of life
once
if I have the right
to hurt myself
with the other man's grief
but maybe
shapes love,
ungraspable affection,
a bridge -
a bridge
that gives me
a piece of the other man's life
and wouldn't I be
so alone in this world
in my world, in my head,
in my universe
if I wouldn't at least
receive a piece of life
once
and
give a piece of life
once
Published 10th Feb 2019
Author's Note
intepta, Feb 10 2019 - Berlin
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Anonymous
- Edited 12th Apr 2020 8:45pm
10th Feb 2019 00:12am
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10th Feb 2019 00:15am
10th Feb 2019 2:01am
10th Feb 2019 11:41am
15th Feb 2019 9:40pm
Interesting thought: Isolation vs other's grief. With an engineer's mindset, a bridge is usually a good thing. Fröhlichen Valentinstag!
18th Feb 2019 4:10am
Wow!
This is such a heavy spill
and when I thought about what You spilled
I realized the spiritual depth!
Unbelieveably strong and encouraging.
This is such a heavy spill
and when I thought about what You spilled
I realized the spiritual depth!
Unbelieveably strong and encouraging.
24th Apr 2019 8:24pm
this is raw, I dig it. its like a sharpened axe being taken to self worth and emotion trying to rebuild. my favorite part was
"so alone in this world
in my world, in my head,
in my universe".
well penned piece. keep'em coming.
"so alone in this world
in my world, in my head,
in my universe".
well penned piece. keep'em coming.
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
22nd Jun 2019 11:16pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 29th Apr 2020 5:45pm
25th Dec 2019 12:35pm
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