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Retrospect From my Cell
Mirrored shards
Pasts
Glisten against my thinking
Searches for broken glass
Casts
Gather pieces, linking
Reflection of repeats
Redundancy
Unlearned in some respects
A trash can full of ideas
Ideals
Reread a thousand times
A splintered mirror
where
I might see ya
In solitude of commitment
Subject to a Prism
of Feelings
Waiting
Wasting
Wanting
Hoping
Confined
To a Prison
of
my
Dreams.
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Re. Retrospect From my Cell
dearest Tallen great self-reflection...
oh wait my apologies I just read it again you are confined to a prison of dreams... I feel you sigh...
love Brenda 🌹
oh wait my apologies I just read it again you are confined to a prison of dreams... I feel you sigh...
love Brenda 🌹
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Re: Re. Retrospect From my Cell
9th Feb 2019 8:15pm
Can our dreams not be liken to the Jailer?
Often,
we prefer our dreams to the waking world
and in the same way, many a convict prefers prison life to freedom because this is all they know.
I believe it takes courage and encouragement
to live a life of freedom.
appreciate the read, always, dear Brenda
Often,
we prefer our dreams to the waking world
and in the same way, many a convict prefers prison life to freedom because this is all they know.
I believe it takes courage and encouragement
to live a life of freedom.
appreciate the read, always, dear Brenda
Re. Retrospect From my Cell
9th Feb 2019 8:19pm
Really great piece this resonates so damn much especially the ending lines
"Confined
To a Prison
of
my
Dreams."
Yup exactly this
Felt this deeply
Excellent!👏👏
"Confined
To a Prison
of
my
Dreams."
Yup exactly this
Felt this deeply
Excellent!👏👏
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Re: Re. Retrospect From my Cell
9th Feb 2019 8:22pm
Happy (always) to share like Feelings with You.
Is this a good thing? .....the resonating?
I pray it is not a poor gig.
Honored for the RL add
Is this a good thing? .....the resonating?
I pray it is not a poor gig.
Honored for the RL add
Re: Re. Retrospect From my Cell
9th Feb 2019 8:27pm
I wouldn't say good or bad I just mean I know the feeling of being trapped in the prison of ones own dreams as you so poetically put it
No prob this is a fantastic write 👏
No prob this is a fantastic write 👏
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Re: Re. Retrospect From my Cell
9th Feb 2019 9:00pm
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Re: Re. Retrospect From my Cell
10th Feb 2019 1:50am
In my youth I've seen the inside of a cell in nearly every state I've lived in
to include the U.S. Bases I've been stationed at and the countries I've resided in.
I believe,
You and me have grown and moved forward and past those energetic days.
to include the U.S. Bases I've been stationed at and the countries I've resided in.
I believe,
You and me have grown and moved forward and past those energetic days.
Re. Retrospect From my Cell
9th Feb 2019 11:24pm
Felt ... everything has been done before artistically is a view ... so how we measure against the standard is to re-cycle better than the next ... lovely ... Bless and love ...
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Re: Re. Retrospect From my Cell
10th Feb 2019 1:51am
Re. Retrospect From my Cell
10th Feb 2019 1:38am
you captured the conundrum of the mind
to perfection....
i felt every stanza...
to perfection....
i felt every stanza...
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Re: Re. Retrospect From my Cell
10th Feb 2019 1:53am
I pray You struggle no more;
i continue to struggle every day and night.
my struggle continues as I close my eyes and seek refuge within a slumberous state of sleep
i continue to struggle every day and night.
my struggle continues as I close my eyes and seek refuge within a slumberous state of sleep
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Re: Re. Retrospect From my Cell
10th Feb 2019 6:07pm
I've always looked at mirrors in a Duality sort of way.
Reflective Portals
and once broken, create a multi-portals making if more difficult to know which path is the one I should be on.
& reflections of past, present and future depending on what type Scrying I want to perform.
thank You for always sharing Your reads
Reflective Portals
and once broken, create a multi-portals making if more difficult to know which path is the one I should be on.
& reflections of past, present and future depending on what type Scrying I want to perform.
thank You for always sharing Your reads
Re. Retrospect From my Cell
10th Feb 2019 12:35pm
I'm thinking about things being broken and put back together to make something better than before.
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Re: Re. Retrospect From my Cell
10th Feb 2019 6:09pm
I can actually see what You're saying and I think now perhaps mirrors might take on a
triality when broken.
appreciate the read and share
triality when broken.
appreciate the read and share
Re. Retrospect From my Cell
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10th Feb 2019 8:02pm
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Re: Re. Retrospect From my Cell
10th Feb 2019 9:15pm
I Feel You, Sky
sometimes no words are needed
and to honor with an RL add
says more than words, often
as I do the RL action without comment
when I am unable to put into words
my Feelings.
appreciate You and Your love
sometimes no words are needed
and to honor with an RL add
says more than words, often
as I do the RL action without comment
when I am unable to put into words
my Feelings.
appreciate You and Your love
Re. Retrospect From my Cell
11th Feb 2019 1:27am
oh goodness Tallen, you know how i am since meeting you
upon your arrival..
yes, i stepped away for awhile while reading this one and
must say :do not stop breathing, we must continue:
upon your arrival..
yes, i stepped away for awhile while reading this one and
must say :do not stop breathing, we must continue:
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Re: Re. Retrospect From my Cell
11th Feb 2019 1:52am
i continue because I've met compassion and tenderness via emotions felt from spoken and read words.
I Feel You.........
have felt You...........
want to feel You anew
I Feel You.........
have felt You...........
want to feel You anew