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Reality Feed
Condescending
Promising
Lying
Eyes
Patronize
To disguise
Inside
Hideous and vile
Insidious visions
Of Murderous
Dreams
Feeding on
Subconscious thoughts
Toxicity spreads
Injecting sickness
Insanity infects
Reality and
Three
y
Unrelenting
Terminal
Crying
Mouth
Quivering
Open and wet
Hungry
Ravenous and wild
Primal intentions
Predator on
.. prey
Feeding frenzy
Raw sexuality
Feverish intensity
Feeling your thickness
Fucking me
69
Breathlessly
Smiling
Teasing
Voices
Whispering
Sweet as
Candy
Confections and cream
Technicolor dreams
Leave me
Shivering
Feeding me
My necessity
Embracing ecstasy
Tasting sweet
.......Nothings
9
without you within me
Promising
Lying
Eyes
Patronize
To disguise
Inside
Hideous and vile
Insidious visions
Of Murderous
Dreams
Feeding on
Subconscious thoughts
Toxicity spreads
Injecting sickness
Insanity infects
Reality and
Three
y
Unrelenting
Terminal
Crying
Mouth
Quivering
Open and wet
Hungry
Ravenous and wild
Primal intentions
Predator on
.. prey
Feeding frenzy
Raw sexuality
Feverish intensity
Feeling your thickness
Fucking me
69
Breathlessly
Smiling
Teasing
Voices
Whispering
Sweet as
Candy
Confections and cream
Technicolor dreams
Leave me
Shivering
Feeding me
My necessity
Embracing ecstasy
Tasting sweet
.......Nothings
9
without you within me
Published 9th Feb 2019
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9th Feb 2019 12:53pm
Love the poetry form and flow, tight, as we said, "welcome back." You have returned as is you never left, nice
10th Feb 2019 5:13pm
9th Feb 2019 3:57pm
Like your last lines, read together:
9
without you within me [ie what might be called a SIXless couple!]
9
without you within me [ie what might be called a SIXless couple!]
10th Feb 2019 5:14pm
9th Feb 2019 4:18pm
10th Feb 2019 5:16pm
9th Feb 2019 5:34pm
Nice mix of bad times and good desires. The 9 threw me off for a while, but after seeing Solomon_song comment, it now makes sense. Ingenious.
10th Feb 2019 5:20pm
Im thinking maybe more along the lines of mad scientist than genius. But without the sciency stuff. Yes, maybe just the madness internalizing. Yep.
Lol. Apologies. And thanks
Lol. Apologies. And thanks
9th Feb 2019 9:08pm
Love the flow in this girl. You really pLaYeD with your words & format. I embrace that!
10th Feb 2019 5:22pm
I really like the way you use the word "embrace " to describe the feelings. Makes me feel warm and fuzzy. Haha
Medinda, this sounds hunnngry! But who shall feed the hunger, when the batsperson has hit the bowler for a 6? Who will serve the yn?
The wordflow soothes the intricacy of the ecstasy.
Great work.
The wordflow soothes the intricacy of the ecstasy.
Great work.
12th Feb 2019 7:56am
12th Feb 2019 5:56pm
13th Feb 2019 1:18am
Feels very sad with the realisation that there's no one sharing this with you. You were almost doing ok on your own but...
16th Feb 2019 10:15am
Almost? C'mon Snaggy, I AM doing pretty dang good on my own. I thought you had faith in me. Lol
26th Feb 2019 9:01pm
Ok, sister, I have to say after reading this...I felt like creamin in my jeans dear girl...LOL
I love the flow, the choice words you used, and I think it is tasteful and classy for an erotic poem. I find the art in the sex in this as well. Nice read. Thanks for sharing.
I love the flow, the choice words you used, and I think it is tasteful and classy for an erotic poem. I find the art in the sex in this as well. Nice read. Thanks for sharing.
26th Feb 2019 10:23pm
6th Mar 2019 4:13am
I just thought this to be a beautifully written and classy style of an erotica poem
