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Loops
Nervously I wait
nothing new,
the death thoughts race
my mind a noisy funeral parlor
the anxiety bores me
yet it's still here
encompassing
encircling
repeating the same old same
nothing new,
the death thoughts race
my mind a noisy funeral parlor
the anxiety bores me
yet it's still here
encompassing
encircling
repeating the same old same
Published 8th Feb 2019
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8th Feb 2019 10:39pm
Really love this one ... so distilled ... crisp lines ... perfect line breaks ... awesome in flow and cadence ... it had me reading and rereading ... still buzzing inside my head ... that is great poetry ... bravo my dear poetess ...
8th Feb 2019 11:05pm
9th Feb 2019 4:05pm
Damn so deeply relatable
Very very familiar feeling
Excellently expressed emotions!👏👏
Very very familiar feeling
Excellently expressed emotions!👏👏
9th Feb 2019 4:13pm
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12th Apr 2019 1:07pm
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