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"Perfect sense"
"It all makes perfect sense"
The atmosphere feels so tense.
Its time we all commence change
and realize we need to rearrange this deranged reality we've created.
At this point, everyone's sedated
or inebriated.
One way or another
we cover our truest selves,
shut off from society.
Behind a mask
Our daily disguises.
Regular routines
no surprises
day after day
as the sun rises
you live each moment
all the same way.
Is this feeling here to stay?
"It all makes perfect sense"
Published 7th Feb 2019
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7th Feb 2019 12:31pm
Truth in observation, Hunter. We become accustomed to the mundane until we feel it's normal.
I love how you've tightened this work up.
I love how you've tightened this work up.
7th Feb 2019 2:09pm
Thanks so much Ahavati! Yup the lives of to many
Appreciate you taking time to read!🙏
Appreciate you taking time to read!🙏
7th Feb 2019 6:21pm
change is the only constant...& a soul of truth in search in endless traverse..liike yours..feels this ..knows how to bring this too..the light is within..
I loved the refrain ...such punch. & have read this more than once in ur scribes i feel.."Is this feeling here to stay? '...could see you dear poet..write on.
I loved the refrain ...such punch. & have read this more than once in ur scribes i feel.."Is this feeling here to stay? '...could see you dear poet..write on.
7th Feb 2019 6:53pm
Appreciate your lovely words of wisdom and Kindness uma!🙏
Thank you so very much!
Thank you so very much!
