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One Night Stand
She favors a one night stand
Just a few hours for a thrill
A brief encounter on demand
Just enough to get her fill
I observe her fleeting need
Admire her as she gets on top
But I disdain her careless speed
And point out that I'm not her prop
She still tends to hasten as she slides
Her own satisfaction paramount
She ululates and then decides
It's high time for a quick dismount
But I am in need of some release
Demand my share of this one night
I require satisfaction, and some peace
Before I vanish by morning light.
Just a few hours for a thrill
A brief encounter on demand
Just enough to get her fill
I observe her fleeting need
Admire her as she gets on top
But I disdain her careless speed
And point out that I'm not her prop
She still tends to hasten as she slides
Her own satisfaction paramount
She ululates and then decides
It's high time for a quick dismount
But I am in need of some release
Demand my share of this one night
I require satisfaction, and some peace
Before I vanish by morning light.
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Re. One Night Stand
Anonymous
3rd Feb 2019 10:45pm
The title caught my attention...
Very nicely written!
Very nicely written!

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Re: Re. One Night Stand
3rd Feb 2019 11:23pm
I'm glad the title caught your eye, and that you enjoyed the content. Thank you Catman!
Re. One Night Stand
3rd Feb 2019 10:47pm
dearest Sir Crow so selfish this type of lover pisses me off
I'm glad you demanded your share of satisfaction...
love Brenda 💕
I'm glad you demanded your share of satisfaction...
love Brenda 💕
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Re: Re. One Night Stand
3rd Feb 2019 11:26pm
I wouldn't have her any other way. Thank you for the kind comment and RL entry Brenda!
Love,
Thomas
Love,
Thomas
Re. One Night Stand
3rd Feb 2019 11:21pm
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Thank you Leo. I love that Stones song. I believe that was their first big hit.
Re. One Night Stand
4th Feb 2019 3:03am
Damn were you on point with your rhymes of seduction. Smooth as butter and hot stuff!!
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Re: Re. One Night Stand
6th Feb 2019 00:59am
I try to go with the flow and rhyme. Sometimes it works, sometimes not. Thank you Pandora!
Re. One Night Stand
4th Feb 2019 6:52am
Rhyming comment:
She just wants a 'hit and run'
before the rising of the sun,
get her fill of the hump and grind,
not care if she leaves you behind.
She just wants a 'hit and run'
before the rising of the sun,
get her fill of the hump and grind,
not care if she leaves you behind.
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Re: Re. One Night Stand
6th Feb 2019 1:00am
Re: Re. One Night Stand
6th Feb 2019 6:19am
You may if the lines are part of something bigger, acknowledging where you first saw them - I have the same idea about these which I will post. Wait to see mine first, may I suggest.
I agree with the theme of the poem that One Night Stands can be little more than smash and grab sex,
I agree with the theme of the poem that One Night Stands can be little more than smash and grab sex,
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Re. One Night Stand
4th Feb 2019 1:32pm
Damn, she was just gonna leave without letting you get you??? Lol very nice ink👍🏾 I enjoyed.
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6th Feb 2019 1:09am
Re. One Night Stand
Anonymous
4th Feb 2019 5:40pm
Oh, demand your release...damn fine write.

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6th Feb 2019 1:10am
Re. One Night Stand
5th Feb 2019 9:08pm
Re: Re. One Night Stand
Yes, fun. That's how much of my work is intended. I try to show you a good time. Thank you LilDragonFly!