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A Cold Day In Paradise
A leak is grounds to shut off gas
No heat, no shower, no oven
I pull the covers, hibernate
And hope that leak will soon be found
But a local girl comes around
Offers me a hand job for the warmth
I lie back while she begins to stroke
And feel my ice begin to melt
My gratitude knows few bounds
But I wonder if she is a pro
Yet her mercy is granted free of charge
And I hope that she will never go.
No heat, no shower, no oven
I pull the covers, hibernate
And hope that leak will soon be found
But a local girl comes around
Offers me a hand job for the warmth
I lie back while she begins to stroke
And feel my ice begin to melt
My gratitude knows few bounds
But I wonder if she is a pro
Yet her mercy is granted free of charge
And I hope that she will never go.
Published 5th Feb 2019
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5th Feb 2019 9:21pm
dearest Sir Crow a very pleasing way to stay warm...
sexy inking...
love Brenda 💕
sexy inking...
love Brenda 💕
5th Feb 2019 9:47pm
5th Feb 2019 9:50pm
5th Feb 2019 10:10pm
That's doing it the hard way. Maybe that's just as it should be. Thank you LilDragonFly!
5th Feb 2019 9:54pm
Damn crowfly. I love it when your ink gets all sexy & dirty with its rhymes!!
5th Feb 2019 10:13pm
So glad you're pleased, Pandora. I find sex, dirt and rhymes go well together if I'm up for it. Thank you!
6th Feb 2019 1:45am
Absolutely. I just finished one I'm ashamed of. Beyond my realms. Lol😮
5th Feb 2019 9:55pm
5th Feb 2019 10:15pm
Better than freezing to death. A dirty mind can be a source of warmth when all else fails. Thank you Leo!
5th Feb 2019 10:08pm
5th Feb 2019 10:19pm
Thank you, Manny. I fantasize and forget about setting the space heater. I'm glad about the timing. May your days be warm and comfortable, and your dreams come true.
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