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Cupid's curse
Cupid’s arrow
Pierced my heart
Blade so narrow
Ripped me apart
Confusion rules
When love struck
Oh so cruel
Complete mind fuck
You see her
In every deed
You would defer
To her every need
You are full
Of desperate want
So beautiful
Every thought she'd haunt
Cupid’s gift
Is but a curse
Cut adrift
Left for the worse
What can I do
When on my own
But dream of you
When left alone.
Pierced my heart
Blade so narrow
Ripped me apart
Confusion rules
When love struck
Oh so cruel
Complete mind fuck
You see her
In every deed
You would defer
To her every need
You are full
Of desperate want
So beautiful
Every thought she'd haunt
Cupid’s gift
Is but a curse
Cut adrift
Left for the worse
What can I do
When on my own
But dream of you
When left alone.
Published 3rd Feb 2019
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There is so much depth and emotion in this. I also feel the truth and hurt you portray. This is all of what a mindfuck indeed, is. Love it!! Glad to see your presence again too.;)
3rd Feb 2019 5:56pm
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3rd Feb 2019 9:13pm
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10th Feb 2019 7:52pm
4th Feb 2019 00:05am
I agree with Sky_dancer about the flow and rhyme. But it's really the emotion that gets me here, particularly that melancholy last stanza. Fine work, Rjm.
10th Feb 2019 7:53pm
