Sin

Thank you ☺

A fabulous seduction here, playing with the elements of heaven and hell.  But damn fine sell on "precious sin".  You also used the word "jubilant' which I recently discovered rhymes quite well with lubricant.

Haha, you have me laughing now. Im so jubulient and full of lubricant. Lmao. I'm glad you appreciated it and found it add worthy. I'd been sitting on some scribbles but felt leary regarding the religious aspect. I saw this pic and from it, came an edit I was happy with. Thank you, T!!

You've planted a deadly seed.  I suspect jubilant/lubricant will end up in a future write.  I thought the religious aspect was a crucial element to amplify the "sin" context.

Hmm, don't put that past me to fit those two in together. I absolutely wanted to play on the aspect of sin, but the original got a little TOO sacrilegious for my comfort zone; esp to post. I wrote one called Alter of Sweet Sin many months back and was ok with it so I just wanted to toy with the idea again.🙏(There is only a boy in prayer emoji, no girl)

Seductive temptation portrayed. Favourite lines:

Giving herself to him, every valley and vale;....
If he meets her at the opaque gates of her pearl;

Thank you, that was my intent. I so loved that reference too, Solomon! Thanks for reading and commenting.

very sexy and hot
lifts the mind to heavenly bliss

awesome

Thank you, nutbuster. I'm glad you appreciated my sinfully sweet piece of prose !

Thank you Danny. I struggled with posting it in a more devious depth and this pic helped me tone it down to something sinfully sweet. Glad you liked it!

Oh, this is sinfully gorgeous. Loved it, very much.

Thanks a bunch, love!!

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Naughty and nice.  Well done erotica.

Thank you, dear Leo. Just what this girl wishes to portray;)

Oh you feisty, girl. I absolutely love this poem. Let the fun times begin, meow. >*_*<

Me, feisty? Games?......I'm in;)