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Glory Days Of Love
Sun beaming brightly
A clear cerulian blue sky
A beautiful day
Gladness fills my heart
As I behold the beauty
Of life around me
Warm and happy thoughts
Fill my mind as it sail on
In the shore of time
I remember you
I remember days like this
When I was with you
Days of summer wine
Days of springtime in my heart
Of roses in bloom
Tears misted my eyes
Reminiscing memories
Of our days gone by
Glory days of love
Passing through my life, leaving
Memories behind
Wiping tears, I smiled
Realizing love's essence
As a gift of time
A clear cerulian blue sky
A beautiful day
Gladness fills my heart
As I behold the beauty
Of life around me
Warm and happy thoughts
Fill my mind as it sail on
In the shore of time
I remember you
I remember days like this
When I was with you
Days of summer wine
Days of springtime in my heart
Of roses in bloom
Tears misted my eyes
Reminiscing memories
Of our days gone by
Glory days of love
Passing through my life, leaving
Memories behind
Wiping tears, I smiled
Realizing love's essence
As a gift of time
Published 29th Jan 2019
Author's Note
Love is a gift of time to us.
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29th Jan 2019 12:57pm
Beautiful words. Very nostalgic and really resonates with me. Stunning expression of how it feels to look back with fondness on a time once shared with a love. Never forgotten.
Love these lines:
"Gladness fills my heart
As I behold the beauty
Of life around me"
It's a rare and beautiful moment when you find this, you just feel excited by the simplest things and life is good. I usually find that feeling out by the sea or lake and it's so powerful it puts a smile on your face which no-one else sees.
Really loved it, the only feedback I would give on this is perhaps I would drop the word blue from the second line.
"A clear cerulian blue sky"
The alliteration of clear cerulean is evocative enough for me , the blue seems unnecessary and complicates the simplicity of the line. But that's just my thoughts on this.
Thank you for sharing :)
Love, cobalt
Love these lines:
"Gladness fills my heart
As I behold the beauty
Of life around me"
It's a rare and beautiful moment when you find this, you just feel excited by the simplest things and life is good. I usually find that feeling out by the sea or lake and it's so powerful it puts a smile on your face which no-one else sees.
Really loved it, the only feedback I would give on this is perhaps I would drop the word blue from the second line.
"A clear cerulian blue sky"
The alliteration of clear cerulean is evocative enough for me , the blue seems unnecessary and complicates the simplicity of the line. But that's just my thoughts on this.
Thank you for sharing :)
Love, cobalt
