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You
Between these thighs of a milky white hue; a glistening and silkened sheath of pink awaits. The utmost of raw and unabated endeavors, it needs.
You.
Beneath it's parted folds; ecstasies tender bud thumps a most steady percussion. It's a tune with a void to my core; to be filled to the brim, it needs.
You.
In recesses - deep, a wildfire swelters and courses like lightning. To collide; extinguished in lusts liquid flow of a milky white hue, it needs.
You
You.
Beneath it's parted folds; ecstasies tender bud thumps a most steady percussion. It's a tune with a void to my core; to be filled to the brim, it needs.
You.
In recesses - deep, a wildfire swelters and courses like lightning. To collide; extinguished in lusts liquid flow of a milky white hue, it needs.
You
Published 28th Jan 2019
| Edited 4th Feb 2019
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- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
28th Jan 2019 7:08pm
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28th Jan 2019 7:26pm
Thank you, Barona. I truly appreciate it and your little play on words in the closing.
28th Jan 2019 7:11pm
28th Jan 2019 7:27pm
28th Jan 2019 7:53pm
Much passion desire and sensuality in your ink. Your depth of imagery drew me deep within. Enjoyed it very much dear Pandora.💐
Wolfman🐺
Wolfman🐺
29th Jan 2019 2:57am
Thank you for always acknowledging my imagery. Without it, writing is not worthy of reading so I'm humbled if that shines through!!
Anonymous
28th Jan 2019 8:00pm
Pandora,
Great writing, my friend. No joking, it's sensual, and so well penned.
Really fantastic. You keep getting better with your poetry.
Well done.
Matthew.
Great writing, my friend. No joking, it's sensual, and so well penned.
Really fantastic. You keep getting better with your poetry.
Well done.
Matthew.
29th Jan 2019 3:01am
Thank you for flattering me so. This is one great comment to read. Although I'm writing, it's been an uneasy day with words for some reason. I'm so glad you see improvement.💞
28th Jan 2019 8:36pm
29th Jan 2019 3:04am
Glad you think so. Perhaps I should have incorporated a prelude. *facetious grin*
28th Jan 2019 10:02pm
And "you" are becoming quite a talent. I agree with Matthew. You are improving, and were pretty damn good to begin with.
29th Jan 2019 3:06am
Oh, crowfly! If ever I needed a day to read this comment, this is one!! Thank you and I'm ecstatic you think so.
29th Jan 2019 4:20am
You have painted a gorgeous picture in this write. And to so elegantly display the need for the "steady percussion'. I also found "the wildfire swelters" line to be very pleasing and effective. Hot read!
30th Jan 2019 9:27pm
You're such a tease. Offering a brief glimpse, and teasing the readers with your ticklish words. Naughty naughty.
Nicely written, my dear.
Nicely written, my dear.
31st Jan 2019 2:47am
Thank you again, Luna. It's so very nice to be seeing you here today! I love naughty and ticklish words, although the erotic side is being taken over by emotional purging.😯
