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...of forlorn men and their broken pens
how would one describe
loneliness
when the word
solitude
puts a positive spin
on something that is
desolate
and blank
Published 27th Jan 2019
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
27th Jan 2019 11:55pm
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I could feel the desolation in this, Cold One. For that I am sorry and hope the Muse will be kind.
In regards to solitude - I do believe there is a difference in it and loneliness. Solitude is sought as an escape from worldly congestion, while loneliness is an imposed sentence passed by circumstance.
In regards to solitude - I do believe there is a difference in it and loneliness. Solitude is sought as an escape from worldly congestion, while loneliness is an imposed sentence passed by circumstance.
29th Jan 2019 00:27am
28th Jan 2019 2:25am
Anonymous
28th Jan 2019 4:27am
Cold One,
Love your thoughts, my friend!
That's fantastic.
MZ.
Miss you my man. How are you?
Love your thoughts, my friend!
That's fantastic.
MZ.
Miss you my man. How are you?
29th Jan 2019 7:09am
welcome my Brother Matt!
sorry bro i was pinned down
by life! in a good way mostly..
apologies for not being back soon enough!
i am doing Ok My brother! Hope yuo are well too!
Humbled I am by your and all other Friends generosity here!
appreciate all of you ...beyond words!
sorry bro i was pinned down
by life! in a good way mostly..
apologies for not being back soon enough!
i am doing Ok My brother! Hope yuo are well too!
Humbled I am by your and all other Friends generosity here!
appreciate all of you ...beyond words!
Anonymous
29th Jan 2019 7:17am
Cold One,
Everyone loves you here, my friend. You're cool(to the point of cold. Lol), a great thought provoking writer, and a really great guy. I'm thrilled to know you.
Stay in touch.
And yes, I'm doing OK, although this winter's hitting us hard, and double digit temps are getting hard to come by these days. I think the sun's gone out.
TTYS buddy,
MZ.
Everyone loves you here, my friend. You're cool(to the point of cold. Lol), a great thought provoking writer, and a really great guy. I'm thrilled to know you.
Stay in touch.
And yes, I'm doing OK, although this winter's hitting us hard, and double digit temps are getting hard to come by these days. I think the sun's gone out.
TTYS buddy,
MZ.
28th Jan 2019 6:14am
Oh! This put a lump in my throat. Solitude and loneliness are two very different things indeed....
28th Jan 2019 1:01pm
i dig the utter depths of the emptiness the blankness the nothingness..the pitch black darkness one's in ..despite the so blinding suns of the word the word as if invented hard..in ur masterful way u say,
"when the word
solitude
puts a positive spin"
I could feel how the Absolute means the Same despite the spins n signs ...
Poetic one. i do get what is Cold the underlying Cold & what lies within the within of Cold..
write on..
"when the word
solitude
puts a positive spin"
I could feel how the Absolute means the Same despite the spins n signs ...
Poetic one. i do get what is Cold the underlying Cold & what lies within the within of Cold..
write on..
29th Jan 2019 00:36am
See above... however, sometimes neither is the cause or the cure for the broken pen. At times it's just the mundane...endure my brother. This too shall come to pass.
*missing yo_ :-(
*missing yo_ :-(
