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Sweet, May She Be
May she always come to you as vivid as a dream; nearly so, that you almost cry Bringing forth a rattle within your bones; stirring and shaking you so
Blessed be her voice; hovering about you as if clouds over treetops high
Ever should you be a ship lost at sea; she - your anchor from a wretched undertow
May you feel ever so wondrous - as if being at the summit of the greatest mountain Cherish and nourish her so; as she brings the scribbling thoughts you wish to have May she replenish your mind; free flowing knowledge like a fresh spring fountain Her language and dialect to fall upon your paper; your ink, to then be a healing salve
May you hear even a whisper at your ear; she, like a conch shell washed upon shore Guiding the pen; mind and hand eager, but your tongue left rendered without speech
If ever grieving words lost; may she be the most welcome of knocks outside your door Sweet, be your Muse; always gifting your mind the writing you so earnestly beseech
Shall she stay within; never allowing your words to just merely shrivel up and die May she always come to you as vivid as a dream; nearly so, that you almost cry
Published 26th Jan 2019
| Edited 7th Feb 2019
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A wish to all of us as we know the devastation of writers block and the loss of substance to our writing. Sweet may your Muse be to you
A wish to all of us as we know the devastation of writers block and the loss of substance to our writing. Sweet may your Muse be to you
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26th Jan 2019 10:16pm
The muse can carry with her so much beauty with a feeling of passion and invincibility... terrific poem Pandora
27th Jan 2019 00:23am
Always blessed when she knocks upon my door. A lovely, genuine celebration of her gifts.
27th Jan 2019 2:01am
Thank you, Tenderloin. I either praise her, grieve her or cuss her. Ironically this all come to me on a mere trip to go pee. I was astonished as it's the longest piece I've written in awhile now.🥂 Cheers to the girls, T!!
27th Jan 2019 4:55am
If this write is any indication, it might be worth more trips to the loo. ;)
27th Jan 2019 4:35pm
27th Jan 2019 1:08am
Brava Pandora! I needed this one. Beautifully written with a wealth of awesome words.
Thank you, hun. I'm glad it set in and I surely hope it moved your Muse so we can be blessed with your words once again (no pressure). Big hugs!!
27th Jan 2019 1:59am
she searches not find that lost
enters your dreams in witch she finds that which she has lost
sweet write
enters your dreams in witch she finds that which she has lost
sweet write
27th Jan 2019 2:05am
27th Jan 2019 2:08am
27th Jan 2019 7:38am
Beautiful very beautiful imagery Pandora...at times when I am graced to come upon your ink, you at times are my muse of inspiring me to write from deeper inside my inner minds eye....Thank you for this mind stimulating ink we all need to read here in DU!!!!💐💐
Wolfman🐺
Wolfman🐺
27th Jan 2019 4:42pm
Aww, thank you. That's so very kind of you to say, as usual. I think it's an amazing gift when the musings of our writing can inspire another's works and vice versa. That's one of the things I like about DUP being so small and cozy too, our tight little niches make our interactions all the more personal and meaningful.
28th Jan 2019 1:16am
Very welcome.
I believe as you wrote below is so very true...
"That's one of the things I like about DUP being so small and cozy too, our tight little niches make our interactions all the more personal and meaningful."💕
Wolfman🐺
I believe as you wrote below is so very true...
"That's one of the things I like about DUP being so small and cozy too, our tight little niches make our interactions all the more personal and meaningful."💕
Wolfman🐺
30th Jan 2019 9:34pm
I've been experiencing writer's block since this new year started. I do wish I can get it over soon. Perhaps your poem will bring me luck?
31st Jan 2019 2:40am
Omgoodness, Luna..I send you a big hug and some encouragement. It's the thing we all dread and I knew I hadn't seen you lately.
"Sweet May She Be" towards your inspiration!💞
"Sweet May She Be" towards your inspiration!💞
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16th Mar 2019 5:56pm
Yes sir, it sure does. I used to put my faith into human muses & that was toxic. She doesn't make me cry as much;)
Thank you dearly for catching up on my writing..it means a lot. I must return the favor more so on my next visit.
Thank you dearly for catching up on my writing..it means a lot. I must return the favor more so on my next visit.
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