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Before I Go
walking on the edge
of life and death
smiling for today
maybe not tomorrow
with each step
every breath inhaling
sweetness of living
wondering when it’s ending
knowing in my soul
days are already counted
from heavens above
for only they truly know
Angels preparing hymns
to welcome me thru heavens gates
when I leave behind
ones I’ve luved and known in time
those who have touched this life
in ways I can’t express
just hope they’ve read my words
and know they inspired me
days too short for tears
time now to leave blessings
smile with strangers and friends
perhaps make a difference
in just one more life before I go
*To my poetic Bro ~ Again*
(Wanted you to know you’re not alone in thought,
you’ve inspired my emotions deep within,
sending you luv & hugs my friend,
hope this brings you comfort that you’ve made
a difference in my life here at DU,
THANK YOU!)
Copyright © 2019 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
of life and death
smiling for today
maybe not tomorrow
with each step
every breath inhaling
sweetness of living
wondering when it’s ending
knowing in my soul
days are already counted
from heavens above
for only they truly know
Angels preparing hymns
to welcome me thru heavens gates
when I leave behind
ones I’ve luved and known in time
those who have touched this life
in ways I can’t express
just hope they’ve read my words
and know they inspired me
days too short for tears
time now to leave blessings
smile with strangers and friends
perhaps make a difference
in just one more life before I go
*To my poetic Bro ~ Again*
(Wanted you to know you’re not alone in thought,
you’ve inspired my emotions deep within,
sending you luv & hugs my friend,
hope this brings you comfort that you’ve made
a difference in my life here at DU,
THANK YOU!)
Copyright © 2019 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Before I Go
26th Jan 2019 6:16pm
o sis I just happened to now see this what a delightful poem you have composed my eyes were dry and now no more I have found my sis in you
I shall be away for a day or two then compose my reply purple hue on this one to you
I shall be away for a day or two then compose my reply purple hue on this one to you
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30th Jan 2019 5:32pm
Awe Bro........hank you for sharing tears with me........just needed you to know you’re not alone.......I’m standing right beside you hugging your heart with mine......honored by the RL......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Before I Go
26th Jan 2019 6:17pm
Gorgeous poem, flowergirl! Just lovely...wonderfully expressed with a very motivating message at the end.
"those who have touched this life
in ways I can’t express
just hope they’ve read my words
and know they inspired me"
I really related to that part... thank you for sharing :)
edit: the picture you picked for this one is beautiful also!
"those who have touched this life
in ways I can’t express
just hope they’ve read my words
and know they inspired me"
I really related to that part... thank you for sharing :)
edit: the picture you picked for this one is beautiful also!
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30th Jan 2019 5:35pm
Hey NB.......I’m humbled by your visit.......you’re such a great writer yourself........thank you for smiling upon my ink.......so happy it’s touched you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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1st Feb 2019 00:46am
Hey Bender........I’ve read some of your inks and you are inspiring.......that’s why people comment on your writes.......thank you for sharing your thoughts.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Before I Go
26th Jan 2019 6:31pm
A marvelous spill!👏👏 reallu enjoyed this profound piece
"with each step
every breath inhaling
sweetness of living
wondering when it’s ending"
Love this so much so wonderfully written an awesome message here
Excellent👏👏
"with each step
every breath inhaling
sweetness of living
wondering when it’s ending"
Love this so much so wonderfully written an awesome message here
Excellent👏👏
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1st Feb 2019 00:51am
Hey Hunter........I’m thrilled by your encouraging words you’ve left me.......happy you’ve enjoyed my ink.......thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Before I Go
26th Jan 2019 6:36pm
I cannot wait tomorrow may be too late i may or may not see a tomorrow who can but heavens say I may still live as long as I will heaven knows
I have died many times and still I have returned It's Gods will
and will power in me I am so happy I have been able to instill fire in you o sis
I was born along with death and @ nearing 80 yet I live on happily Remember this for times to come
We all have simply come not because we wanted to we our existence to parents give due but death is not of or within our control We live coz we have to
Life is to be made purposeful We have no other choice But a strong will will us guide so one day
if not today
some day if not tomorrow
may I that say
but on another day as tomorrow will never come our way
except as another today
believe me sis the heavens will be red ere your poetic bro is dead
But that won't happen yet,
let the sky enjoy your purple hue till my life becomes blue
Wait and see heavens speak through me
Kindness is thy right and my support
as a DUP is and was mandatory
I come or came as again
just to learn about life of those
who live in vain
For the love of life do longer remain
you are a purple sis
ah all know it
Live long to share your poetry and folks like me
will love to digest it
and resurrect if need be
sister OF DUP
purplish
read this casually in a day or two from a sojourn when I am back shall poemise this properly GOOD NIGHT PURPLISH
I have died many times and still I have returned It's Gods will
and will power in me I am so happy I have been able to instill fire in you o sis
I was born along with death and @ nearing 80 yet I live on happily Remember this for times to come
We all have simply come not because we wanted to we our existence to parents give due but death is not of or within our control We live coz we have to
Life is to be made purposeful We have no other choice But a strong will will us guide so one day
if not today
some day if not tomorrow
may I that say
but on another day as tomorrow will never come our way
except as another today
believe me sis the heavens will be red ere your poetic bro is dead
But that won't happen yet,
let the sky enjoy your purple hue till my life becomes blue
Wait and see heavens speak through me
Kindness is thy right and my support
as a DUP is and was mandatory
I come or came as again
just to learn about life of those
who live in vain
For the love of life do longer remain
you are a purple sis
ah all know it
Live long to share your poetry and folks like me
will love to digest it
and resurrect if need be
sister OF DUP
purplish
read this casually in a day or two from a sojourn when I am back shall poemise this properly GOOD NIGHT PURPLISH
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Re: Re. Before I Go
1st Feb 2019 1:04am
Hey Bro.......your words here are beautiful.......im very touched by this ink......it’s wonderful.......I’m actually speechless.......thank you so much for leaving inspiring words to me.......deeply felt.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Before I Go
Anonymous
26th Jan 2019 9:33pm
Purple One,
That's beautiful. When it's your time(which is not for a long time), you will receive 110% of the vote from the big guys upstairs because of that beautiful heart.
Wonderful dedication to your friend. I'm glad others know how fantastic you are.
Love,
Matthew.
That's beautiful. When it's your time(which is not for a long time), you will receive 110% of the vote from the big guys upstairs because of that beautiful heart.
Wonderful dedication to your friend. I'm glad others know how fantastic you are.
Love,
Matthew.

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Re: Re. Before I Go
1st Feb 2019 1:17am
Hey Matthew........thank you for your always uplifting praise.......a blessing you always are my precious friend.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Before I Go
27th Jan 2019 10:13pm
Love your spirit of generosity, Flower. Great last line. I can assure you that your work has made a difference in my life. Your luv, and lines, inspire me.
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Awe Crow........humbly thanking you.......words you leave me motivate me to keep writing.......you’ve made a difference in my life too......you’ve encouraged more than you know.....honored by the RL.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Before I Go
Oh wow!To your muse I say,may he pull through!A deep felt message...You have a big beautiful heart flower girl!!!
XO to both Yah!!!
XO to both Yah!!!
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1st Feb 2019 1:33am
Hey Sanaa.......thank you for leaving luv upon my ink.......I know Again appreciate your well wishes........I appreciate you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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30th Jan 2019 3:20am
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1st Feb 2019 1:34am
Hey Robert.......always a blessing to see you back........thank you for your words........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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3rd Feb 2019 2:35pm
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3rd Feb 2019 9:30pm
Hey Robert......honored by such words from talent such as you......humbly thank you..purple luv & hugs xo :)
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19th Feb 2019 2:38am
Awe Howling.......you’re precious........thank you for smiling upon my ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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19th Feb 2019 4:14pm
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19th Feb 2019 4:16pm
Hey Lil......honored you’ve visited my ink.......you’re a great poetess.......thank you........thrilled you like this.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Before I Go
3rd Mar 2019 4:34am
Although I don't believe angels and demons are different and though I don't believe in a Heaven or a Hell,
this is sooooooo beautifully spilled for any who see death as anything but a beautiful passage to someplace else.
Your spill is amazing in depth and wonder........
this is sooooooo beautifully spilled for any who see death as anything but a beautiful passage to someplace else.
Your spill is amazing in depth and wonder........
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Re: Re. Before I Go
17th Apr 2019 3:50am
Hey Tallen........thank you for your leaving me such graceful words.......we don’t all believe the same but perhaps can feel things the same way........purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Before I Go
11th Jul 2019 3:40am
SOFT POEM
When tomorrow never comes life is deprived of all love and fun just think of me where again has gone beyond the beyond no sound no song why has again gone forlorn its been many a morn has again really gone
When tomorrow never comes life is deprived of all love and fun just think of me where again has gone beyond the beyond no sound no song why has again gone forlorn its been many a morn has again really gone
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13th Jul 2019 10:25am
Hey Bro......we all will be called to our last day on earth......in heaven here be lots of songs and glory.......each morning we will awake to glory above.......I will remember you and so will others who have gotten to know you......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Before I Go
14th Jul 2019 5:08pm