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Crepuscular Contrasts
Berries contrast with snow drifts and so strike
The subtle tissue of red memories;
My pain builds up with art; while your delight
Is bound to my slow heartbeat; let me please
With breath and skin and voice and, yes, with mind,
That conjures with these contrasts, as thoughts stray
Back to the snow that drifts until I'm blind
To memories of how we used to play.
You say you cannot wait to dream and sleep;
I say who needs to sleep, let reveries
Be fashioned in the darkness as we keep
Our fucking faith with wanton memories,
That, in themselves, like love and lust, will last;
And, like your latest strike, sow new contrasts...
The subtle tissue of red memories;
My pain builds up with art; while your delight
Is bound to my slow heartbeat; let me please
With breath and skin and voice and, yes, with mind,
That conjures with these contrasts, as thoughts stray
Back to the snow that drifts until I'm blind
To memories of how we used to play.
You say you cannot wait to dream and sleep;
I say who needs to sleep, let reveries
Be fashioned in the darkness as we keep
Our fucking faith with wanton memories,
That, in themselves, like love and lust, will last;
And, like your latest strike, sow new contrasts...
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Re. Crepuscular Contrasts
25th Jan 2019 10:34pm
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Re. Crepuscular Contrasts
25th Jan 2019 11:17pm
Lovely lines, SweetOblivion. I believe I've said this before, maybe a few times, but your style is one of a kind. A marvelous job.
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26th Jan 2019 6:21am
Re. Crepuscular Contrasts
25th Jan 2019 11:17pm
Magical rhythm in this.
This line spoke to me:
"I say who needs to sleep, let reveries
Be fashioned in the darkness as we keep"
This line spoke to me:
"I say who needs to sleep, let reveries
Be fashioned in the darkness as we keep"
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Re. Crepuscular Contrasts
26th Jan 2019 00:04am
Your poem makes me think of Mistletoe.
They tend to retain their berries through most of the winter. The berries can either bright red or white.
Originally it was considered appropriate to kiss under the white berries but make passionate love under the red.
Loved your write.
They tend to retain their berries through most of the winter. The berries can either bright red or white.
Originally it was considered appropriate to kiss under the white berries but make passionate love under the red.
Loved your write.
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26th Jan 2019 6:24am
I remember kissing a boy under the mistletoe when I was about 14 and everyone saying how sweet we looked just to make us blush
Re. Crepuscular Contrasts
26th Jan 2019 00:07am
Your poem makes me think of Mistletoe.
They tend to retain their berries through most of the winter. The berries can either bright red or white.
Originally it was considered appropriate to kiss under the white berries but make passionate love under the red.
Loved your write.
They tend to retain their berries through most of the winter. The berries can either bright red or white.
Originally it was considered appropriate to kiss under the white berries but make passionate love under the red.
Loved your write.
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Re. Crepuscular Contrasts
26th Jan 2019 3:22am
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Re. Crepuscular Contrasts
26th Jan 2019 4:12am
loved reading this listening to my inner voice find the rhythm in the rhyme...a most enjoyable experience...
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26th Jan 2019 6:26am
Capturing an inner voice is a wonderful ability sir - I wish I could do so consistently
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