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s.o.s
take me to that place
where I can breathe
no fear of the darkness
it was here first
quietly it evolved an identity
it just was...
while contemplating its existence
it dreamed of us...
chaotic thought became rational
we are evolving nicely
a great family of entities
moving towards the edge
of this dimension...
to enter into a new one
by force of nature
we have outgrown our nursery
this is an s.o.s to those listening in
this plane of existence can barely contain us
as we yawn, stretch and evolve infinitely
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Re: Re. s.o.s
25th Jan 2019 1:01pm
thank you graciously dearest poet...I'm happy this spoke to you...
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25th Jan 2019 1:34pm
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Re: Re. s.o.s
26th Jan 2019 2:42am
thank you graciously for the wonderful comment...I'm so happy you felt this one...
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25th Jan 2019 7:36pm
Re: Re. s.o.s
26th Jan 2019 2:42am
thank you graciously beautiful Atomik One for the love on this write...
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Anonymous
25th Jan 2019 8:01pm
Crimmy,
You have a brilliant mind, my friend. You were born to be a poet.
Wonderful.
Love,
Matthew.
You have a brilliant mind, my friend. You were born to be a poet.
Wonderful.
Love,
Matthew.

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Re: Re. s.o.s
26th Jan 2019 2:43am
thank you graciously dearest Matthew you are so beautiful to me...
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Re. s.o.s
25th Jan 2019 11:46pm
The evolution is the key. You speak of dimensions here, very fitting considering the stellar and otherworldly elements of your fine work. I always feel transported reading you.
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26th Jan 2019 2:43am
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow I'm happy this write spoke to you...
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Re. s.o.s
26th Jan 2019 2:40pm
You just keep 'em comin
As always another breathtaking piece with a spectacularly timeless message
Truly beautiful and profound!๐๐
As always another breathtaking piece with a spectacularly timeless message
Truly beautiful and profound!๐๐
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Re: Re. s.o.s
28th Jan 2019 12:58pm
thank you graciously dearest Hunter for the love on this write...
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love Brenda ๐น