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while channeling the universe
it speaks to me of greater things
my soul rises to meet the celestial
connects with a higher thinking
deep in space, I go to my place
it's dark there...
no stars or sound intrudes
the black was there before time began
when I ache with the weight of being I ascend here
my soul fully undressed
I swirl in the energy
my thoughts expand and unfurl
they transcend time...
it stops here and for a moment I can breathe
one by one my cares fall away
I know my place of origins again
this life is but a blip on the radar of existence
we are cosmically connected
an interwoven consciousness
we are a collective source
meant to learn and observe
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
25th Jan 2019 12:29pm
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Re: Re. origins
25th Jan 2019 12:31pm
thank you dearest Bender I'm happy you have such a place to go as well... I think we can all go there...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. origins
25th Jan 2019 12:33pm
Re: Re. origins
25th Jan 2019 12:34pm
thank you graciously dearest Tender One I'm happy you felt this one...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re: Re. origins
25th Jan 2019 12:40pm
I need to be reminded of such things when I begin to waver into that dangerous place of self-doubt.
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25th Jan 2019 1:02pm
Anonymous
- Edited 7th May 2019 00:46am
25th Jan 2019 12:39pm
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Re: Re. origins
25th Jan 2019 12:52pm
thank you graciously dearest poet I like the way you think... time does stop here the thought is kept on record the universe its self has a memory... I like the thought of it being a photograph...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. origins
Anonymous
25th Jan 2019 8:04pm
Wow, Crimmy, that was fantastic. Absolutely engrossing, enchanting, and beautiful(and the poem was great, too!). lol.
You're wonderful. (see why I want to live in your head?).
Great writing, my friend. Please write more.
Love,
Matthew.
You're wonderful. (see why I want to live in your head?).
Great writing, my friend. Please write more.
Love,
Matthew.
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Re: Re. origins
25th Jan 2019 8:06pm
thank you graciously dearest Matthew I'm blushing and smiling at you beautiful soul... you are so kind to me...
I deeply cherish you...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply cherish you...
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
25th Jan 2019 8:11pm
Repaying the beautiful love you've shown me, and it's a pleasure, and so easy to do, for you.
Thanks Angel.
Love,
Matthew.
Thanks Angel.
Love,
Matthew.
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Re. origins
26th Jan 2019 00:03am
I always love your ambition and cosmic references, Brenda. An interwoven consciousness is a blessing. Enthralling and beautiful work.
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Re: Re. origins
26th Jan 2019 00:05am
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow I'm happy you liked this one...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
Re. origins
26th Jan 2019 2:36pm
Wow this is divine👏👏
Deeply profound and so fantastically penned!!
Love this verse
"my soul fully undressed
I swirl in the energy
my thoughts expand and unfurl
they transcend time...
it stops here and for a moment I can breathe "
A wonderful space this is to be in
A place I try to be often👏
The ending verses were superb,
"one by one my cares fall away
I know my place of origins again
this life is but a blip on the radar of existence
we are cosmically connected
an interwoven consciousness
we are a collective source
meant to learn and observe"
Yesss you know whats up
This is great stuff my kind of poetry right here and a beautiful message you've sent out
Love this cosmic spill👏👏
Deeply profound and so fantastically penned!!
Love this verse
"my soul fully undressed
I swirl in the energy
my thoughts expand and unfurl
they transcend time...
it stops here and for a moment I can breathe "
A wonderful space this is to be in
A place I try to be often👏
The ending verses were superb,
"one by one my cares fall away
I know my place of origins again
this life is but a blip on the radar of existence
we are cosmically connected
an interwoven consciousness
we are a collective source
meant to learn and observe"
Yesss you know whats up
This is great stuff my kind of poetry right here and a beautiful message you've sent out
Love this cosmic spill👏👏
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Re: Re. origins
28th Jan 2019 1:00pm
thank you graciously dearest Hunter wow for such a fantastic comment that gifted me many smiles... please forgive my tardy reply I get behind sometimes here...
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 💕