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Pain So Deep
Emotional pain so deep
It really does hurt
Tears I do weep
He's an introvert
Words tear me apart
I don't feel loved
I feel pain in my heart
You're my beloved
Your words are like knives
They hit me in my core
I feel very deprived
I hate to hear you roar
I do suffer you see
In a silent prison
I dream to be free
Something is really missing
It really does hurt
Tears I do weep
He's an introvert
Words tear me apart
I don't feel loved
I feel pain in my heart
You're my beloved
Your words are like knives
They hit me in my core
I feel very deprived
I hate to hear you roar
I do suffer you see
In a silent prison
I dream to be free
Something is really missing
Published 23rd Jan 2019
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24th Jan 2019 1:19am
24th Jan 2019 1:36am
24th Jan 2019 1:58am
Emotionally deep write
Very wonderfully written
That last verse is ultra relatable
"I do suffer you see
In a silent prison
I dream to be free
Something is really missing"
So understandable
Great spill!👏
Very wonderfully written
That last verse is ultra relatable
"I do suffer you see
In a silent prison
I dream to be free
Something is really missing"
So understandable
Great spill!👏
24th Jan 2019 2:13am
24th Jan 2019 3:22am
This poem reminds me of the struggles of loved ones of borderline personality disorder. Pain so deep. God bless.
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24th Jan 2019 8:29pm
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Anonymous
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25th Jan 2019 1:11pm
Are you really in jail? Prayers to you.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Xo
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Xo
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3rd Feb 2019 00:58am
I have found myself reading many of your pieces this evening. You have amazing talent and I love the raw emotion you are able to convey through your writing. Thank you for sharing.
3rd Feb 2019 11:24am
