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Death's Blood
Sputtering
.. the smears..
Spewing
Everywhere wet with salivary screams
Fleeting
.. the fissure..
Fretting
Watch the cloying corpse convulse
Debilitating
.. the death..
Dripping
Slit the windpipe clean with the scalpel, let the hot ruby red liquid run like Bolt down the throat!
So did Death take the blood from the life of the living.
.. the smears..
Spewing
Everywhere wet with salivary screams
Fleeting
.. the fissure..
Fretting
Watch the cloying corpse convulse
Debilitating
.. the death..
Dripping
Slit the windpipe clean with the scalpel, let the hot ruby red liquid run like Bolt down the throat!
So did Death take the blood from the life of the living.
Published 16th Nov 2011
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17th Nov 2011 4:02pm
death in the night
the horror of such fright
terror just blinding our sight
& without Prayer how can we ever see the Light....
the horror of such fright
terror just blinding our sight
& without Prayer how can we ever see the Light....
17th Nov 2011 4:15pm
*gruesome
Prayer, i submit true & fair
Terror, is just a reflected stare
Horror? dont bother, dont care
Night, gives me no fear so i dare
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This wasnt so much about dying but more of a reality that when death comes the blood which gives you life, ceases.
Thank you for the stanza! :)
Prayer, i submit true & fair
Terror, is just a reflected stare
Horror? dont bother, dont care
Night, gives me no fear so i dare
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This wasnt so much about dying but more of a reality that when death comes the blood which gives you life, ceases.
Thank you for the stanza! :)
17th Nov 2011 4:17pm
17th Nov 2011 4:41pm
Lol , yeah i've realised but i dont hold it against you :). We all make mistakes and have our issues; math is mine *hideface* so yeh man, no problem.
17th Nov 2011 5:05pm
math is not so hard....you just have to learn the process....& math will also make your words evolve beyond any & all limits....
18th Nov 2011 11:37pm
20th Nov 2011 3:19am
DTD! I'm so pleased by your compliment, thanks! Started 3 different ones but haven't been ably to finish; time eludes --@books
NB: thank you for subcribing and I always welcome feedback :)
NB: thank you for subcribing and I always welcome feedback :)
