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A Walk in the Woods
A Walk in the Woods
I walked
Along
The creek
Today,
Tracks
And foot prints
Touched
The way,
And as
The forest
Closed
Me in,
This thought
Became
My only
Fin.
To touch
Her bark
And know
Her limbs
To stay
Until
The moonlight
Dims.
I walked
Along
The creek
Today,
Tracks
And foot prints
Touched
The way,
And as
The forest
Closed
Me in,
This thought
Became
My only
Fin.
To touch
Her bark
And know
Her limbs
To stay
Until
The moonlight
Dims.
Published 21st Jan 2019
Author's Note
Waiting is timeless, and sometimes waiting for intimacy, closure, consideration, being listened to, reciprocity....all the things that make life seem real....becomes a flicker of hope.....other times.....a bonfire on the snow.
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22nd Jan 2019 1:40am
22nd Jan 2019 6:51am
23rd Jan 2019 9:52pm
Beautiful poem, running turtle. I loved the natural imagery. Thanks for sharing!
23rd Jan 2019 11:32pm
Thank you....I was just at that same spot not an hour ago....getting darker and colder by the moment.....
11th Jan 2020 6:21pm
26th Jan 2019 2:09pm
26th Jan 2019 3:42pm
This 1000 foot walk along the creek is my safe place in the world....I know just about every tree....
Maybe I should actually paint down there.....hmmmmmmm.
Maybe I should actually paint down there.....hmmmmmmm.
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3rd Feb 2019 9:01am
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3rd Feb 2019 4:03pm
Sand and iron dust....the water does that.....and then other times.....
Every walk is different....thanks.
Every walk is different....thanks.
19th Feb 2021 11:56am
Oooooh Ohhhh!!!!
...ewwww,
......PICK ME?
PICK MEEEEE?!...
I WANT TO GO
I SWEAR I DO
AND LEAVE A ROSE BUSH ALONG SIDE IT
I'D GO THERE ANYTIME FOR A FIRE DOWN BY
any part of THAT CREEK of yours
ILL HELP YOU,
PICK MEEEEE?
I'M ALL YOULL NEED TO PREPARE FOR AND, TO CARRY THAT Moonlit Mission OUT
...ewwww,
......PICK ME?
PICK MEEEEE?!...
I WANT TO GO
I SWEAR I DO
AND LEAVE A ROSE BUSH ALONG SIDE IT
I'D GO THERE ANYTIME FOR A FIRE DOWN BY
any part of THAT CREEK of yours
ILL HELP YOU,
PICK MEEEEE?
I'M ALL YOULL NEED TO PREPARE FOR AND, TO CARRY THAT Moonlit Mission OUT
