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Stagnation in Love

Stuck in this love and I don’t know what to do
Love ain’t on lock like it used to
Bitches out here feel the same way about you that I do
Ain’t about to let you just keep playing me for a fool
You got females out here feeling the same way I do
Dig yourself a grave cuz you deserve to be handled
Like you did my heart
You think you a fucking savage
Keep my stomach hurting with the words that just stab me
Been that bitch for you ever since we made that commitment
March 6th was the day that we did
Ever since then shit been different
Thought we had it all together but I guess we didn’t
Suicidal thoughts every time you hurt my feelings
I pray to God while I stare up at this ceiling
Get us back to the way it was before it felt like you stopped caring
Before you tore my heart
Before I felt so lost


Got so many things that I used to believe in
Most of the people that I love just don’t believe in me
Tired of the shadiness behind closed doors
All those secret conversations is all on record
I’m too fucking loyal to be feeling betrayed
By the ones who know that I’m 10 toes down
Don’t gotta question me
I tell you every fucking thing
No secrets no delays
Why can’t I get the same in return
Written by TarnishedMom (Tracey)
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Not a poem but a song I’m writing in the works of editing I want honest criticism even though I’m using poor language and bad English. Just read it and be honest about where it takes you.
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