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Tempestuous
Tempestuous, yet lovely sterns delight
Your eye, or so it seems; each time you glance
At mine I feel a fire in you ignite:
It burns me like your touch; you make me dance
Across your desk, your lap or on your bed
Where you bind me spreadeagled and you take
Your pleasure with a flogger; you're more wed
To me with every red mark that you make
Upon my livid rear, before you thrust
Into the heated centres of desire;
There is no halfway house; i don't adjust
My hopes or expectations, as you wire
My needs to yours and your dark genius:
It's lovely, stern and so tempestuous.
Your eye, or so it seems; each time you glance
At mine I feel a fire in you ignite:
It burns me like your touch; you make me dance
Across your desk, your lap or on your bed
Where you bind me spreadeagled and you take
Your pleasure with a flogger; you're more wed
To me with every red mark that you make
Upon my livid rear, before you thrust
Into the heated centres of desire;
There is no halfway house; i don't adjust
My hopes or expectations, as you wire
My needs to yours and your dark genius:
It's lovely, stern and so tempestuous.
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Re. Tempestuous
19th Jan 2019 8:57pm
you naughty girl with all this temptation before my eyes
fires inter desires
great write
fires inter desires
great write
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20th Jan 2019 2:51am
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19th Jan 2019 10:28pm
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21st Jan 2019 8:55pm
Re. Tempestuous
19th Jan 2019 11:00pm
Love your tempests, SweetOblivion. Nothing like the equation of pain and pleasure. More fine erotica!
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21st Jan 2019 8:56pm
Re. Tempestuous
20th Jan 2019 00:37am
The need and bond between master and submissive expressed in wonderful words. Well done.
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21st Jan 2019 8:57pm
Re: Re. Tempestuous
22nd Jan 2019 5:27pm
From what I've read you are already very good. But of course, always strive to be better.
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22nd Jan 2019 6:09pm
Re. Tempestuous
20th Jan 2019 1:01am
''as you wire
My needs to yours and your dark genius: ''
nice!!
as always..flawless
My needs to yours and your dark genius: ''
nice!!
as always..flawless
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Re: Re. Tempestuous
21st Jan 2019 8:58pm
Re. Tempestuous
Anonymous
21st Jan 2019 10:29am
How we love those red marks... passionate ink Dear SO!
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21st Jan 2019 9:01pm
Re. Tempestuous
23rd Jan 2019 9:33am
A little red faced here...interesting imagery. What a picture it paints of my limited knowledge on the subject but very nice indeed!
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23rd Jan 2019 8:17pm
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23rd Jan 2019 11:42pm
Re: Re. Tempestuous
23rd Jan 2019 11:55pm
Everyone is entitled to their own truths - an inalienable right, if ever there was one.