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''Hello,Goodbye''
I close my eyes
So we can meet
Smiling hello in an alley of dreams...
The tender thunder
Of your voice,
Electrocutes me with ecstasy
In waves of sweet shudders...
I drown in delight
Swathed in warmth,
In drools of molten chocolate pools
Of the delicious hue
Of your eyes...
The spoon smooth
Of your touch,
Caresses the sewn crevices
As honeyed hands,
Melt and sink in
Sweet symphony of manicured melody...
Like in the grip of a Raptor
Atmosphere impaled,
With pleasure
In merciless capture
Mental mist & daunted daze,
I'm in a rapture...
With Life on Pause
Inner inhibitions lost,
To fathom & ponder
As the ink seeps,
While we breathe
As it writes a new chapter...
I close my eyes
So we can meet
Smiling hello in an alley of dreams...
To then open my eyes
As my smile portrays,
Having you & the Joy you bring.
SE.W.1.16.19.
So we can meet
Smiling hello in an alley of dreams...
The tender thunder
Of your voice,
Electrocutes me with ecstasy
In waves of sweet shudders...
I drown in delight
Swathed in warmth,
In drools of molten chocolate pools
Of the delicious hue
Of your eyes...
The spoon smooth
Of your touch,
Caresses the sewn crevices
As honeyed hands,
Melt and sink in
Sweet symphony of manicured melody...
Like in the grip of a Raptor
Atmosphere impaled,
With pleasure
In merciless capture
Mental mist & daunted daze,
I'm in a rapture...
With Life on Pause
Inner inhibitions lost,
To fathom & ponder
As the ink seeps,
While we breathe
As it writes a new chapter...
I close my eyes
So we can meet
Smiling hello in an alley of dreams...
To then open my eyes
As my smile portrays,
Having you & the Joy you bring.
SE.W.1.16.19.
Author's Note
For Timothy....💋
Happy Birthday🎂
Happy Birthday🎂
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Re. ''Hello,Goodbye''
Anonymous
17th Jan 2019 3:25am
Hey SE......this is a brilliant tribute to Timothy.......very heart touching......enjoyed much.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. ''Hello,Goodbye''
17th Jan 2019 5:30pm
Hi,F.G!
Always happy to hear from you and thanks so much for
the thumbs up...he's...absolutely amazing
Always happy to hear from you and thanks so much for
the thumbs up...he's...absolutely amazing
Re. ''Hello,Goodbye''
Anonymous
17th Jan 2019 7:46pm
Hey Sajeen,
I just saw this. Wow, you have a beautiful way with words. I knew you were smart, but you're a wonderful writer, too.
Lucky guy to be serenaded with such beautiful words.
Love,
Matthew.
I just saw this. Wow, you have a beautiful way with words. I knew you were smart, but you're a wonderful writer, too.
Lucky guy to be serenaded with such beautiful words.
Love,
Matthew.
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18th Jan 2019 5:46am
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19th Jan 2019 9:40pm
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31st Jan 2019 10:34pm
Simply beautiful. Loved the water imagery, something I often use myself as a fellow lover of the deep. Thanks for sharing! :)
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2nd Feb 2019 7:37pm
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20th Mar 2019 4:58pm
I love this! I love the imagery, I was picturing so many different things as I was reading this. Great write x
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30th Jun 2019 11:49pm
Re. ''Hello,Goodbye''
14th Jul 2019 3:35pm
Actually... Was smiling while reading this..
In short... Smiled throughout ...
The oxymoron seconded by alliteration killed it all...
This is indeed Sea.
Lucky Timothy. 😉
In short... Smiled throughout ...
The oxymoron seconded by alliteration killed it all...
This is indeed Sea.
Lucky Timothy. 😉
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15th Jul 2019 2:34pm
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21st Jan 2020 8:20am
Re. ''Hello,Goodbye''
15th Feb 2020 7:34am
Wow sassy sensational romantic poem, a bit strong terms. Kudos,
Plz Pleez do read my newest poem too, it has enough comments unless you want to discuss sth it's ok if u just read it.
Plz Pleez do read my newest poem too, it has enough comments unless you want to discuss sth it's ok if u just read it.
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