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Precious Smile
a smile
any of I’ve chosen, until ----
infects and thrills
hearts leaping o’er
mountain tops
over glades and hills.
a glimpse of smile
laughter
causes elation
again and again.
lusting for what comes after
I want to understand.
the voice
of my friend
so gentle, so free
throughout my mind it rings
ringing of sensuality!
her smile gives me no time of day
an option to flirt?
reflecting, what can I do but
smile?
her smile
causes my insides to leap
flooding my senses
it fills
burying my heart deep
insides climb over the
rocks and rills. . .
O, smile for me once more
even if only friends we be
in spite of my love ignored ----
O, smile that special smile at me!
smile.
any of I’ve chosen, until ----
infects and thrills
hearts leaping o’er
mountain tops
over glades and hills.
a glimpse of smile
laughter
causes elation
again and again.
lusting for what comes after
I want to understand.
the voice
of my friend
so gentle, so free
throughout my mind it rings
ringing of sensuality!
her smile gives me no time of day
an option to flirt?
reflecting, what can I do but
smile?
her smile
causes my insides to leap
flooding my senses
it fills
burying my heart deep
insides climb over the
rocks and rills. . .
O, smile for me once more
even if only friends we be
in spite of my love ignored ----
O, smile that special smile at me!
smile.
Author's Note
( Listening to Barbra Streisand’s Smile -- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5R6k9rkXZTk )
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Re: Re. Precious Smile
16th Jan 2019 6:58pm
the first thing i look for in a potential
new friend (and teeth -- I've been accused by my current close friends of having a teeth fetish -- LOL)
But i smile without showing teeth
Genuine smiles
all are enchanting
new friend (and teeth -- I've been accused by my current close friends of having a teeth fetish -- LOL)
But i smile without showing teeth
Genuine smiles
all are enchanting
Re. Precious Smile
Anonymous
16th Jan 2019 6:43pm
Hey Tallen,
That was nice, my friend. Awesome.
Funny, I was listening to Babs this morning, but in a much sadder capacity.
Good job.
MZ.
That was nice, my friend. Awesome.
Funny, I was listening to Babs this morning, but in a much sadder capacity.
Good job.
MZ.

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Re: Re. Precious Smile
16th Jan 2019 7:00pm
I can't explain it but the word
smile
popped into my mind
and I went on You Tube and in the search typed the word and the first artist at the top was Babs
then You know me
I had to spill and share ;)
smile
popped into my mind
and I went on You Tube and in the search typed the word and the first artist at the top was Babs
then You know me
I had to spill and share ;)
Re: Re. Precious Smile
Anonymous
16th Jan 2019 7:02pm
Excellent.
And yes, you do spill often, but very well.
I'm waiting for a spill after a bathroom visit. lol.
Cool guy are you,
MZ.
And yes, you do spill often, but very well.
I'm waiting for a spill after a bathroom visit. lol.
Cool guy are you,
MZ.

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Re: Re. Precious Smile
16th Jan 2019 7:08pm
Don't think for one iota I can't
(and won't) spill a Latrine type write!!!!
It has to be super humorous, though,
else it might get too gross.
(leave it to You to put this thought in my brain - lol)
(and won't) spill a Latrine type write!!!!
It has to be super humorous, though,
else it might get too gross.
(leave it to You to put this thought in my brain - lol)
Re: Re. Precious Smile
Anonymous
16th Jan 2019 7:59pm
Go to it, young man!
I would love to read that!
MZ.
(But don't tell them it was my idea). lol.
I would love to read that!
MZ.
(But don't tell them it was my idea). lol.

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Re: Re. Precious Smile
16th Jan 2019 9:24pm
" (But don't tell them it was my idea). lol. " <<--ha ha
I am gonna dedicate to You, Brother!
I am gonna dedicate to You, Brother!
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