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My wee lil special guest
It popped on my window as if to say hello
my birdie buddy all sweet and mellow
Dressed in a downy gold gown of yellow
I tried to cheep in tune, join its song to say
'welcome my chirping lil fellow
Oh my it sang then like a feathered cello!
So hi and hello deepunderground fellow worms and twitter tweet tweet
May you find this short 'n' very merry sweet , sweet
This was in honour of my winged guest of honour
For I fawn over you birdies, I'm your fan , a bird lover
Build your nest in my poet's corner, I'm your fawner
Lil birdie you are my VIP, be my guest of honour
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Zaynab_kamoonpury
Published 15th Jan 2019
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Re. My wee lil special guest
15th Jan 2019 7:09pm
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15th Jan 2019 7:12pm
Re. My wee lil special guest
Anonymous
16th Jan 2019 7:42am
Very very lovely write.
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16th Jan 2019 8:11am
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Anonymous
16th Jan 2019 10:18am
You are so welcome.
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16th Jan 2019 9:01am
Re. My wee lil special guest
16th Jan 2019 12:38pm
Lovely write I dig this!👏
Love the flow and rhymes
and the content is fabulous as well
"It popped on my window as if to say hello
my birdie buddy all sweet and mellow
Dressed in a downy gold gown of yellow
I tried to cheep in tune, join its song to say
'welcome my chirping lil fellow
Oh my it sang then like a feathered cello!"
Really beautifully vivid and marvelously penned
Excellent write!👏
Love the flow and rhymes
and the content is fabulous as well
"It popped on my window as if to say hello
my birdie buddy all sweet and mellow
Dressed in a downy gold gown of yellow
I tried to cheep in tune, join its song to say
'welcome my chirping lil fellow
Oh my it sang then like a feathered cello!"
Really beautifully vivid and marvelously penned
Excellent write!👏
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Re: Re. My wee lil special guest
Aww many thanks for digging this , it was meant to cheer too. So cheers!
Re. My wee lil special guest
16th Jan 2019 12:55pm
As requested I'm here reading this delightful read
Charming beautiful flow
Enjoyed the read
Charming beautiful flow
Enjoyed the read
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Re: Re. My wee lil special guest
16th Jan 2019 2:44pm
Warmest thanks for finding it as delightful as I wished. Some cheer is never bad neh. Take care!
Re. My wee lil special guest
16th Jan 2019 2:26pm
It reads as lovely as a bird's singing...cute, lovely and cozy. Would love to be your guest of honor.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
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Re: Re. My wee lil special guest
16th Jan 2019 2:45pm
Aw dearest poetess most welcome to my humble home then, pop in anytime! Warmest thanks for lovely comment too.
Re. My wee lil special guest
Anonymous
16th Jan 2019 3:22pm
Zaynab,
That is fantastic! Thank you for greeting me today, or I wouldn't have seen it, and it made me smile first thing in the morning here at work. I love the way you worded that, 'gold gown of yellow' and 'feathered cello'.
Awesome!
Thanks,
Matthew.
That is fantastic! Thank you for greeting me today, or I wouldn't have seen it, and it made me smile first thing in the morning here at work. I love the way you worded that, 'gold gown of yellow' and 'feathered cello'.
Awesome!
Thanks,
Matthew.
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Re: Re. My wee lil special guest
16th Jan 2019 3:32pm
Glad to make you smile poet, nice that u liked me inviting u, coz once a poet warned me that inviting will undermine your poetry. But there an ocean of poems and they forget to read me mostly usually until I remind them.
Thanks soo much for such a fine delighting comment!
Thanks soo much for such a fine delighting comment!
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Anonymous
16th Jan 2019 3:44pm
I agree with you(rather than your poet friend). There are just so many people, and great poetry, that you just can't see them all, and if you hadn't said something to me, I wouldn't have seen that, and I wouldn't have smiled, and then who knows what would have happened to my day. (wow, that was a long explanation, sorry).
Anyway, I'm excited to be stalkin...I mean following you! lol. Keep writing so I can read more.
Matthew.
Anyway, I'm excited to be stalkin...I mean following you! lol. Keep writing so I can read more.
Matthew.
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Re. My wee lil special guest
16th Jan 2019 3:28pm
Thank you for the invite to read this fun joyous little piece. I love the way you brought it home to DU. Very uplifting, I like that.
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16th Jan 2019 3:37pm
Re. My wee lil special guest
16th Jan 2019 5:07pm
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16th Jan 2019 5:24pm
Woah , ok a passerine is a bird but how would u bellow lol, though it would rhyme eh, thanks much for your comment that made me giggle!
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18th Jan 2019 11:27am
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19th Jan 2019 1:44pm