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Bravo~
There it was the dead air she was waiting for
the time in between lies and bullshit.
Love in layers like the onion and all that boils
down to is burning stench.
Can’t blame the dream though
since reality holds its own truth.
Light up, take a drag
Fill your glass to the rim
Spill the false bravado to page
And there; is where the painful laughter ends.
the time in between lies and bullshit.
Love in layers like the onion and all that boils
down to is burning stench.
Can’t blame the dream though
since reality holds its own truth.
Light up, take a drag
Fill your glass to the rim
Spill the false bravado to page
And there; is where the painful laughter ends.
Published 14th Jan 2019
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17th Jan 2019 2:33am
18th Jan 2019 5:38am
Anonymous
1st Feb 2019 3:03am
Hey Lily.......what a vent.......you always write so graceful even when your angry......very heart touching ink.......feeling your pain......glad I didn’t miss this......luv ya mooches......luv & hugs xo :)
1st Feb 2019 4:19am
13th Oct 2019 9:14pm
Dear T,
“Light up, take a drag...”. Makes me want to sit back and enjoy the show as the cheating main characters blow themselves up from inside. That’s probably too much isn’t it? Oh well.
That damned onion! Everytime you think you’ve gotten to the middle there’s one more wretched layer to take off. Excellent write! H 🌷
“Light up, take a drag...”. Makes me want to sit back and enjoy the show as the cheating main characters blow themselves up from inside. That’s probably too much isn’t it? Oh well.
That damned onion! Everytime you think you’ve gotten to the middle there’s one more wretched layer to take off. Excellent write! H 🌷
