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Souper powers?
The idea of Flying
Without me dying
Is too much to bare
I would be too scared
The thought of invisibility
Without physical agility
I would certainly misbehave
But how would I shave
Telekinesis moves me
But I couldn't let it be
Prefer not to levitate fountains
I'd want to move mountains
Super human feats of strength
Stretching out pennies out into a length
Would it make my lover gush
If every hug was a crush
Reading someone's mind
You never know just what you'd find
Commonly I'd disengage
Most folks minds are just a blank page
I am tired of all the bitchin
As I slog here in the kitchen
I'd like the power to make good soup
Cause what I'm making tastes like poop
A true Souper Power
The idea of Flying
Without me dying
Is too much to bare
I would be too scared
The thought of invisibility
Without physical agility
I would certainly misbehave
But how would I shave
Telekinesis moves me
But I couldn't let it be
Prefer not to levitate fountains
I'd want to move mountains
Super human feats of strength
Stretching out pennies out into a length
Would it make my lover gush
If every hug was a crush
Reading someone's mind
You never know just what you'd find
Commonly I'd disengage
Most folks minds are just a blank page
I am tired of all the bitchin
As I slog here in the kitchen
I'd like the power to make good soup
Cause what I'm making tastes like poop
A true Souper Power
Published 12th Jan 2019
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12th Jan 2019 1:55pm
12th Jan 2019 2:19pm
12th Jan 2019 3:13pm
Excellent write I dig this!👏
Love This verse,
" Reading someone's mind
You never know just what you'd find
Commonly I'd disengage
Most folks minds are just a blank page"
Nicceeee this is great well done!👏
Love This verse,
" Reading someone's mind
You never know just what you'd find
Commonly I'd disengage
Most folks minds are just a blank page"
Nicceeee this is great well done!👏
26th Feb 2019 4:21am
Anonymous
12th Jan 2019 4:15pm
Eee... I’ll swap ya a few good recipes.
Cooking is such a sacred thing. One of the true things that feels like home. Soup especially. Keeps the cold English (Scottish) bones warm.
I actually like the subtle rhyme in this piece. It’s whimsical and has a good rhythm. I also enjoy the smack back to reality in the last line of each stanza. It’s very you.. lol.
Like. Thanks for sharing.
-Winny McCuntage.
Cooking is such a sacred thing. One of the true things that feels like home. Soup especially. Keeps the cold English (Scottish) bones warm.
I actually like the subtle rhyme in this piece. It’s whimsical and has a good rhythm. I also enjoy the smack back to reality in the last line of each stanza. It’s very you.. lol.
Like. Thanks for sharing.
-Winny McCuntage.
26th Feb 2019 4:23am
I was in a whimsical mood, unusually :-)))))))))))))))
Thank you my friend :-))))))
Thank you my friend :-))))))
Anonymous
14th Jan 2019 2:08pm
LOL! I do so love your humorous poetry, my friend. Gave me a good giggle this morning, much needed, I might add! Many many many hugs! :-)
26th Feb 2019 4:24am
I always enjoy your giggles, my job is done :-)))))))))))))))
Love and hugs <3
Love and hugs <3
