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Stranger In Town
Waiting for the man dressed in black
She straightened up her felt garters
Her gunslinger was quite a man
And kissed her left breast for starters
He doffed his notched and precious piece
And threw her on the tawdry bed
His favorite whore was delighted
And knew she would not end up dead
The gunman then produced his cock
And aimed his prize between her thighs
She knew that it was quite massive
It's barrel wide, but no surprise
He then fucked like a champion
Her screams heard until high midnight
Then he dressed and donned his 38
And headed for his next gunfight.
She straightened up her felt garters
Her gunslinger was quite a man
And kissed her left breast for starters
He doffed his notched and precious piece
And threw her on the tawdry bed
His favorite whore was delighted
And knew she would not end up dead
The gunman then produced his cock
And aimed his prize between her thighs
She knew that it was quite massive
It's barrel wide, but no surprise
He then fucked like a champion
Her screams heard until high midnight
Then he dressed and donned his 38
And headed for his next gunfight.
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Re. Stranger In Town
Anonymous
3rd Jan 2019 10:03pm
I love the choice of your picture. This is a famous Anglo Italian actor,known for his macaroni Westerns and commedies. I love your choice of words and the setting. Very dramatic, yet almost satirical. You are truly a great communicator. J

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3rd Jan 2019 10:13pm
That actor is Franco Nero. I should mention that in my notes. This picture, I think, is from the original "Django," directed by Sergio Corbucci. Thank you for the praise, and the knowledge that I'm not the only one here who appreciates spaghetti westerns.
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Anonymous
3rd Jan 2019 10:28pm
Yes, great Italian actor like so many others. I love spaghetti Westerns, with the music of Morricone. Don't forget, i am Italian. 😉J

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Re: Re. Stranger In Town
4th Jan 2019 1:30am
We have similar taste in Westerns. Ever see "A Minute To Pray, A Second To Die"? No Leone or Corbucci, but still a great film.
Re. Stranger In Town
3rd Jan 2019 11:16pm
"tawdry" ... great word ... you know I am a lover of luscious words ... bravo crowfly ...
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4th Jan 2019 10:24pm
I almost just said "double." That would be pedestrian, no? Thank you LilDragonFly!
Re. Stranger In Town
4th Jan 2019 4:06am
I was impressed most of all by the cinematic quality of this work. How easily you are able to transport the reader into another world altogether! Magnificent :)
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Re: Re. Stranger In Town
4th Jan 2019 10:26pm
Thanks for the praise, Velvet. The cinematic quality comes from watching countless westerns, like "A Fistful of Dollars." I like them gritty, and morally ambiguous.
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6th Jan 2019 2:28pm
dearest Sir Crow very sexy gunslinger
bringing the heat...
delicious...
love Brenda ❤
bringing the heat...
delicious...
love Brenda ❤
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6th Jan 2019 9:37pm
Bringing the heat but not the firepower into play. That's reserved for the next stranger in town. Maybe Clint Eastwood, Thank you Brenda!