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Visionary
Dainty and delicate to perfection and of savory billows: fervently observed
Celestial she sat: adorned in a parchment of pale and supple luminescence
A blushed nipple crested: to beautifully sustain of life or be it of unbridled passion Upon her every convex and vale of velvet: a heartening vision of quintessence
Celestial she sat: adorned in a parchment of pale and supple luminescence
A blushed nipple crested: to beautifully sustain of life or be it of unbridled passion Upon her every convex and vale of velvet: a heartening vision of quintessence
Published 28th Dec 2018
| Edited 9th Mar 2019
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28th Dec 2018 4:52pm
Brava Pandora! You capture the beauty of this image well. Romantic piece.
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28th Dec 2018 5:08pm
Lovely. I particularly liked the two lines 'A blushed nipple crested : to beautifully sustain of life or be it of unbridled passion' both purposes are equally beautiful but sometimes it can seem taboo that they can be both attractive and...functional.
28th Dec 2018 5:13pm
Thank you and I very much I agree. I definitely was referring to this side of taboo and in the pure essence of sensuality. I totally get you though.;)
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28th Dec 2018 11:54pm
Hard to compete with all the commentary above, which nails the mood of such a piece. Again, I see that remarkable ability to paint that picture in a most original and respectful way. Nice usage of "convex".
29th Dec 2018 1:45am
Thank you. I almost left out the one part but figured that's what sensuality is all about, not just the sexy parts. I couldn't use plain ole curves so convex fit the mold for an outside the box kinda girl 😉
Anonymous
29th Dec 2018 12:25pm
Oh lordy, a gorgeous visual indeed. Love this so much girl.
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30th Dec 2018 9:09am
You have transported me to another realm altogether with this poem. It is exquisite.
31st Dec 2018 2:26am
