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Her
I'm craving for spiritual bliss;
Muffled in heavenly mist.
Swirling emotions so deep,
Dreaming of her in my sleep.
An elliptical cloud of perfume,
Tasting the whip in a room.
Watching the sun turn to rust.
Smearing my cum with each thrust.
The air in the night is so cool;
Whispering love as we spoon.
Reflections of emerald jewels.
Forbidden consent with no rules.
You touch me in places untouched.
Sucking my fingers in lust.
I'm biting my lip as you speak.
Enraptured by beauty so sweet.
Muffled in heavenly mist.
Swirling emotions so deep,
Dreaming of her in my sleep.
An elliptical cloud of perfume,
Tasting the whip in a room.
Watching the sun turn to rust.
Smearing my cum with each thrust.
The air in the night is so cool;
Whispering love as we spoon.
Reflections of emerald jewels.
Forbidden consent with no rules.
You touch me in places untouched.
Sucking my fingers in lust.
I'm biting my lip as you speak.
Enraptured by beauty so sweet.
Author's Note
Women are my weakness.
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Re. Her
Anonymous
23rd Dec 2018 1:24pm
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23rd Dec 2018 1:37pm
Thanks so much. I try to write in Iambic Tetrameter, which I find easier to rhyme with. I may be slightly inconsistent with syllable counts, but so was Blake.
Dark Sun.
Dark Sun.
Re. Her
23rd Dec 2018 5:05pm
think not of counts
I count none
but enjoyably cummmmmm
u too have cummm weldone
I count none
but enjoyably cummmmmm
u too have cummm weldone
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24th Dec 2018 12:07pm
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Anonymous
24th Dec 2018 2:09am
Beautiful
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27th Dec 2018 11:16pm
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Anonymous
28th Dec 2018 9:16pm
Simply lovely!
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29th Dec 2018 6:32pm
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31st Dec 2018 12:00pm
Wonderful write my dear poet ... perfect blend of eloquence and grit ...
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