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Bee's...knees
Must be a cosmic chance...to find such romance
Her moon shine breeze...across my seven seas
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Seeing in this dual mirror...as I stand near her
While we shake time off...knowing who ought
Then spin as love whirls...into our tunnel swirl
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We are invisible...to the blind eyes of this world
Since always sailing...into our soul wind unfurled.
Published 20th Dec 2018
Author's Note
Her delicious mind... stopping my time
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- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
20th Dec 2018 6:51am
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20th Dec 2018 7:31am
Thank you very much for the read...yes, most all my poems are lyrics...and written to a drum beat
Jeff
Jeff
20th Dec 2018 5:08pm
Phenomenal poetry!👏👏
"We are invisible...to the blind eyes of this world
Since always sailing...into our soul wind unfurled."
Love this! Very good writing👏👏
I dig the flow and the rhymes great piece!
"We are invisible...to the blind eyes of this world
Since always sailing...into our soul wind unfurled."
Love this! Very good writing👏👏
I dig the flow and the rhymes great piece!
20th Dec 2018 7:47pm
21st Dec 2018 5:00am
ah the whirl & the swirls...the momentum is all that i feel is the essence here & anywhere, that beats time & coloured frames!
an eternal cosmic realm you paint in your rhythmic breeze. lovely again dear poet! write on..
an eternal cosmic realm you paint in your rhythmic breeze. lovely again dear poet! write on..
21st Dec 2018 6:12am
Yes, best to embrace the vibration....in the end, we all find the beat...
love always my insightful friend
Jeff
love always my insightful friend
Jeff
21st Dec 2018 3:50pm
21st Dec 2018 9:16pm
Can we be too romantic?...The world would be a better place if so..
Love
Jeff
Love
Jeff
