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Train quatrain
So her love is locked...in a tearless heart
By this golden cage...yet still is set apart
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A history into future...was written in part
As our sunshine rains...the world into art.
Published 14th Dec 2018
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Anonymous
14th Dec 2018 7:46am
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14th Dec 2018 8:11am
Thank you most graciously...yes the source of all...and representation of the Hebrew letters for male and female manifested in form...we cannot see less than three...a supernal triangle
I greatly appreciate the read,
Jeff
I greatly appreciate the read,
Jeff
Anonymous
14th Dec 2018 8:13am
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16th Dec 2018 2:06pm
had been reading & re-reading the quatrain with & without the image contexts..& each time it brings in such new facets that's meaningfully poetic in such rhymed pithiness constraints you had laid out ur verses. the title & each of the verse bring in an overwhelming sense of a compartmentalized continuum that's beautifully holistic..Starting with a 'So'..that's rare a read & stands strongly unique for the built to follow..'sunshine rains' this expression reigns:) thanks much for a crafted read..write on shine on more
17th Dec 2018 9:41am
Thank you, my wonderful friend, for such an in-depth analysis and poetic comment...each line represents an alchemical element ...the picture the aether
Jeff
Jeff
